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LOC: Grand Rapids, MI
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Out the side windows, specks of light come in streaks. Otherwise it’s all dark, raven black. Glances out the head car show only the last light hanging above the big lake. I’m in conversation with Bob Dylan as he talks with Archibald McLeish. They may both be unaware of my presence. On the train, boys talk to girls and girls pretend to ignore boys, all of them giddy for a late July night on Rush Street. It cannot be said often enough the strangeness of our world, all things unknown surrounding...
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i see the heads of the headless men, caught in a box and impaled from the right, or possibly the left, but undulating, swirling about under heavy hands, grieving and streaming and undulating with time, straining for a view above the boards, faced off, yet again, against the headless enemy.
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fires burn the southwest silk turns to burlap gold to stone lovers quarrel and the turning souls cry from the dead
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held in weightlessness this velvet abyss touches with stone silence liquid warmth a pin drops in the mind's ear pebble in a pond a fraction of light a wave forms to hold and carry the rhythm gently it lifts rolls its languid extremities around to embrace softly seductively up back and sides losing itself in tangled hair blanketed from winter kissing the crook of my neck she pulls herself near
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heated and sweating as if having run ten miles or two hours red-splotched and aching and now with all doors coming off hinges me breathless and in doubt post cerebral ill equipped investments being made with no invitation of self nausea resolute defiance for the trade without will, when did this begin? and to whom do i owe the pleasure the pleasure, in this ancient place all things undone and air only creeping like soft horror slowly revealed and to whose appeal? only vaguely occassionally co...
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i like this poem. i'm a fan of simplicity, sometimes even the understated. this is a simple observation with reflections of the human condition with which we can all identify. thanks for writing.
i'm not sure if this is more written for form or for substance, but i find it confusing. i guess that's not a bad thing. many people write to challenge a reader. but this reads more like a riddle than a poem. but if you're writing this to achieve a new school of thought, forget me and get on with being a genius. thanks for writing.
wow, this is a bad place. i think you mean the word famine? and vein has the e first. also, once, twice, three is a charm is leaning on cliche. the rest of the voice is fresh, desperate. thanks for writing.
there's a lot of passion here but i think it falls flat a bit with "cuddling" and also i think you can create something better than "heat of the moment." try to avoid the cliche. thanks for writing.
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