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AGE: 20
LOC: Texarkana, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 12

My name is Ricky Hogan. I like to write. I write a piece everyday about something I observe or when I see something that inspires me. You’ll find that much of my work is philosophical, and relevant to everyday life. There’s something to learn everyday-you just have to look for it. I love rock music. Incubus, Nirvana, Weezer, Days Of the New, Sublime, Toadies, Collective Soul, The Wallflowers, Rage Against the Machine, Blue October, Fuel, Everclear, Guns N’ Roses, I could go on forever…
Anyway, you can catch me here: http://www.myspace.com/heart_lock

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Poetry / Empty..........
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I am excellent at nothing, so Nothing shall I be. I am good for Nothing, I'll just smoke this Devil's Weed.
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Poetry / Twilight
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Thirsty eyes; I must endure prying Light, till I see your face in fallen places once more. The city is stifling, but worry not; for our pleasure, a cabin in the Black Forest away from searching eyes, where our secretive doings shall not be exposed. There, the crickets will serenade us, sing tales of our infatuation. Your coming silences life as it beholds your beauty. The Sun, in her jealousy turns away, taking her leave; she has not my affections. I care not for her golden locks. No, she is,...
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I've found that sustainable success comes not from standing on Victory's peak, but rather being pushed off of it.
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Believe not what your eyes show you; perhaps you know, the path to the soul. Sight alone shall make you blind. In your chest, creates a dark hole. And following a foolish heart at road's end brings no gain. Careless love and summer days might possibly bind it in chains. Take notice of Mind's trickery, as pride is a crippling force. Too much faith in your intellect will make you lame as a horse. Be careful of what you trust in. Beware, I tell you, of assumption. A coy wink and a shake of its h...
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I've found that much of success comes not from standing on Victory's peak, but rather being pushed off of it.
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Short Story / piss stain
This could be a great short story if you would tighten it up a little bit and make a better ending. A lot of repetetiveness. Also, lots of run-on snetences, try chopping them in half. Other than that, I thought this short story was ballin'.
Poetry / Painting Walls
This is a great poem. The only thing I would change is the use of the word "red" too much. TRy to use more specific colors, such as "crimson"
I have to say this really nothing new under the sun. It's all been said before, I don't really see a lot of creativity to this poem. Spice it up. "It is always darkest before the dawn" is a common phrase.
Quotes / mad art
Wow...this quite profound. It reminds me of Emily Dickinson's "Much Madness Is Divinest Sense." This really is a good quote for those who can understand its meaning.
I love this, it reminds us that sometimes we get up in what's not important and it leads us to forget who we are. I wrote a quote that says "Be as a child; they are generally happier than adults." Sometimes we just need to stop and think like children to feel like we are again. The only thing I could advise to make this better is to add more descriptive words. For example, the 4th stanza, second line you could change "hate" into "loathe."
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