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This is good but I wonder if it wouldn't be stronger if you used the "words" instead of imagination. And possibly the use of dashes instead of commas for more impact. Go anywhere -- be anyone -- with words. It does work as you have it, but I'm thinking imagination could just be dreaming as opposed to actually writing, and since your title is Why I Love It, I'm assuming you mean writing. Just my two cents but definitely decent as is if you don't want to tweak it. Best, Robin

Fantastic! It says so much in six words...it has everything - humor, disgust, boredom...I absolutely love this. I know it's a "bad" review in that I can't critique it...but really, I wouldn't change a word. Best one I've read yet...just as I was starting to think I needed to leave this site.

Hilarious. And for some unfortunate writer pals of mine, it could even be Three years writing; ten years editing. One of the better six words I've read on this site. I have no critique other than "good job". Thank God. xo Robin

I think I get this - I'm taking it the funny way like they are a couple splitting up but I'm not sure. That being said, if you do mean it that way, maybe make it a little more clear by saying something like "I love you, hey, that's mine!" Of course I could have misunderstood your point altogether and you may have been talking about his/her heart, soul, etc. But if it is, again, it should be made just a bit clearer. I gave you my gut reaction - not sure if others will agree or not...but if you...

Sad but true. How about tweaking the "years and years" part for a little versatility. Overnight success takes lots of years. Overnight success usually takes a decade Overnight success usually means a decade. Etc. Good job as is, though. xo Rob