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AGE:
15
LOC: Los Lunas, NM
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 24
LOC: Los Lunas, NM
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 24
i have a good time writing and it makes me happy. and hopefully in the future i may can get published. fingers crossed.
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existing in a soulness society where hearts turn to ash and that dark void engulfs the light from the sun. and now my world is black. darkness that is in the coldness of the night as the whispers of the the wind drags along the flesh of my face. but i am content. content of the fact that the warmth from her body...
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deception My scars held the deepest from the poison of your own blade. and youv'e picked your poison well . does it even matter that my wings have been set a blaze by your deception? ignorance is bliss when the one you love is slowly infecting your soul. close your eyes and watch me bleed, and watch the flesh fall off my bones. open your eyes and tell me what you see...
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just let go. let go of your heart when midnight is approaching. run away with me in the night under the the black sky. run before the clock strikes twelve. i can feel your beating heart through the palm of my hand. do you feel that? its my love falling from the heavens. so please run away with me. nothing can hold us back in the dead of night. lets spend the rest of our life on the run and our love for eachother will become like rain. i was the first to fall, and now i want you to jump.
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By thy scent of gods perfection thou shall never feel the darkness within fires rage. Eternity seems forever, until thine flesh descends from the heavensand eternity will never be enough. We stand under moons light staring itno one anothers soul admiring our serenity and angels ivory. Lips as soft as water and winds howl grows i can feel thy heart beat but we are not close. I have not yet held thee in heavens glare, but my heart cries for it. n the night i hear thy whispers through the fogs g...
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the pain has subsided in the coldness of the night. i lie awake in this dark realm of hatred and death. the light died with my soul in the fire that engulfed my body. and now i know for sure there is no cure for this sickness that has infected the blood that runs through my veins. " where am i ?" i said. " here" said a low whisper came from the darkness. I could not see anything, but i could feel the a soft hand stroking the side of my face. " what do you want ...
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wonderful lyrics. i would suggest however that when using the word bond in lyrics and repeating that word so many times made me feel like it dried out the deepness of it. i dont know why, but it does. mix up the words that are not repeating, and use memorable words that stick with the reader through out the lyrics in a good way. overall mix it up the use of words and there meanings. dont know if it makes sense but im just trying to help.
i love the way you expressed this poem. i admire this piece of work.
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