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AGE:
47
LOC: Chehalis, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 12
LOC: Chehalis, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 12
Ciao-
I write mostly as an outlet, usually pain and anger…funny I just now realized that! When I am happy I take pictures. Lately, I have been writing on another website. I enjoy creating…and my mind is in a whirlwind of thought most days.
I have a most adorable husband, Rocco and three grown boys. Billy 16 (nearly grown), Stephen 18 (musician) and Brandon 23 (Entrepreneur)
I welcome any comments and always am looking for new friendships. If I had to choose one word, just one to live by it would be “Peace”.
Peace- Roxy
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The Pit It did not start out that way, each day a little larger it grew almost unnoticeable to the human eye, except she knew intuitively. At once, it seemed It was a huge gaping whole slick as snot so nothing could climb out- inside way, way down in the pit -she sat crossed legged glancing looking around- but never up! The daily happenings were going on around the pit- Now and again a head would drop down and offer a crumb, a "Hi Mom", "Hey Babe", then flash-! Gone! A eternity went by in the...
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Backwards...she smiles as she writes on the last page of the red notebook she was given. Just like she reads the newspaper backwards from end to beginning. It is how she takes on the outside world, backwards! "Black Butterfly you are heading the wrong way." They say to her. She smiles she knows exacctly where she is going -as she spreads her newly hatched damp wings. She thinks to herself - "Just a little longer and my wings will fully be prepared for flight. They called me Black Butterfly! T...
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Tomorrow's today, In bitter cold I type this- Mind ;stop spinning, sleep!
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The Pit It did not start out that way, each day a little larger it grew almost unnoticeable to the human eye, except she knew intuitively. At once, it seemed It was a huge gaping whole slick as snot so nothing could climb out- inside way, way down in the pit -she sat crossed legged glancing looking around- but never up! The daily happenings were going on around the pit- Now and again a head would drop down and offer a crumb, a "Hi Mom", "Hey Babe", then flash-! Gone! A eternity went by in the...
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The Pit It did not start out that way, each day a little larger it grew almost unnoticeable to the human eye, except she knew intuitively. At once, it seemed It was a huge gaping whole slick as snot so nothing could climb out- inside way, way down in the pit -she sat crossed legged glancing looking around- but never up! The daily happenings were going on around the pit- Now and again a head would drop down and offer a crumb, a "Hi Mom", "Hey Babe", then flash-! Gone! A eternity went by in the...
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Sometimes this reviewing is hard stuff.I am empathetic with the lyricist. Very well written - I read it twice, slowly - descriptive, What stod out at first was Mind soaks in the ocean - I had too ponder (which is good) to catch the groove. Next feeling the leather keeps me grounded when I know you me whomever want to fly away. (misspelled- nerves) Vunerability- drowning, fear- people can relate to this- when stuff is great i call it pure (this is pure!) Ah yes the drug is the agent to escape!...
You state you wrote this song for your friend- I feel the impact of that death on you in your lyrics. Your rhyming and tempo are good. There is one area to look over 7th verse last line- think on that a bit. "all has been shred" just isn't fitting or rather strong enough emotionally to hold up to the rest of the lyrics...get to the gut of your feelings here! i.e: now i cling by a thread! Very brave. Good for you keep writing! Peace- Roxy
Equality Review: I think you did a nice job here. You stated your thoughts clearly and with imagery. I followed along with you (and personally am in accordance with you)- This article would do well being published so others can see this! Equality is an important subject and one we are sorely laking understanding of! I hope you will post this in a blog or somewhere more noticeable. What I did see lacking is your form. Readers like to see short paragraphs with a lot of punctuation! I read a stu...
Wow- Your title grabbed my attention! We all deep down have an affinity for our pillows along our mates. I absolutely related to your lyrics. It was refreshing to relate to the longing one has when we are away from loved ones. The choice of descriptive words, raw emotion & bearing ones soul is very brave. I would have broke up the long verse after... Is this distance. -Distance between us. That's Literally not figuratively (would be your next verse)
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