sadpoet's profile
AGE:
27
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 03
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 03
I am an artist and poet but haven’t yet quit my day job!
A little bit about me and my interest:
Art (www.tygrett.com), Music, Painting, Law, The Ocean and it’s creatures; great and small, Seagulls and teaching them to eat directly from my hand, Poetry, Forensics, Politics, Saving Lives, Understanding that if we drove 100 miles an hour straight up, we would be in outer space in about 35 minutes! Blood and Guts, Old Church Architecture, Heaven and Hell, Religion, Brilliant Minds, Skilled Hands, A Kind Heart, Some Very Unique and Powerful Insects, the woodwind-Soprano Saxophone, Color, Culture, Gun Shots and Stabs, Sociololgy, Science, Cellular Mechanisms, Microbiology, Life, The Difference in Sounds of Sirens, Rockabilly, Opals, Low Rise…
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Skill and Luck; never underestimate either!
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Torn and Tattered Effortless we are in our individual magnificence Awaiting judgement of earned insignificance Trapped within the magic, we're doomed to believe Crumbs sifted into tattered hearts are all we seem to leave Pages and pages of spirit and soul, lines are filled Upon a slumbered mind only self will be healed How can some even begin to try to comprehend tortuous messages trapped deep within skin? One who is many, yet united is none and alone Closed minds control us as we vomit up bo...
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Walking around blind with 20/20 vision
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A voice robbed of all hope.
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When you start a piece out with a question, it is an intelligent move and lets the reader know right away, the question they are about to ponder with you. Well done right off the bat. The question is philosophical in nature which is also nice. The first part of his life was spent running in place...SO MEANINGFUL a sentence here, it has twofold or even threefold meaning. Brilliant. , For the sun exposed his faults with aimless illumination...I love how you used the sun here, different and did ...
A passionate and sensitive subject for you I can easily recognize from the CAPS for homeless. Me too. In the mist of a cold night...consider midst? He shuffles in the rain...through the ______ rain. Use words to help the reader "feel" what he is going through, like shards of rain, shards of blue (as it means more than one thing...a color, or a life). Down the middle of the road...too simple, you need powerful statement because you have chosen a topic which you want to scream that someone unde...
I find it very unique, the P's used in the first sentence, it makes the reader want to participate and draws them forward into the piece! The first two sentences are much deeper than they appear and intelligently written...good work! Your work reminds me of some of my own where there is a message in uncommonly used words and sentences. I like the used of "bigger" words and how you've structured and stragically placed them, again very good work! taped...is it tapped? Like tapping your finger? ...
WAY TOO MUCH HERE! It started out good but became an eyesore. I think you should definitely try to condense the sentences here into a "readable" piece. I understand that the repeated "meds for" is a statement but in literature; such as the six word "SMITH Magazine" opportunity, sometimes all you are trying to say is simply six words. there are meds for when we cannot sleep at night when our eyes don’t blink just quite right when we cry and wail when we can’t quite hoist our sail to stop the v...
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