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20 Reviews   24 Comments
What creates the twinkle of stars? A life energy so delicate and fragile Moon, Stars and Sun...the Universe Combination creates something magical! Permanence is not always permanent Only during certain times we choose Not always when decisions are made Someone wins or somebody will lose How would the shell of a child feel When no blood pulses through? Never had I longed to live this An experience so fragile and new Lying still, looking alive Tender little child's ...
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Permanence is not always permanent Only during certain times we choose Not always when decisions are made Someone wins or somebody will lose How would the shell of a child feel When no blood pulses through? Never had I longed to live this An experience so fragile and new Lying still, looking alive Tender little child's shell Cool to touch, I miss you so much Who did this to you, I wish you could tell Sorrow weighs down my heart For you little one Although never had I known you ...
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Poetry / Primary Colors
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5 Reviews   14 Comments
Blue is not the sadness or sorrow it's made out to be It is of a calm, beautiful sky or raging sea Red is not the anger, or hot, devils' flames It is the colour of lifes' energy Which runs through all our veins Yellow is what yellow is And you may ask: "What is that?" The warmth of sun on a summer's day Simply the warmth that melts butter fat!
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4 Reviews   8 Comments
Today began just like any other day. I knew more than I was supposed to There's a rumor going around, my life's work is _______. Somehow my life would account for something by doing it By listening from the inside, by believing in the heart But somehow the heart allowed or disallowed Fourteen seconds-fourteen seconds-one point two miles It wouldn't have mattered if I lived in the Governors' mansion For today began just like any other day. I checked the math over and over I couldn't remember, ...
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Poetry / A Body
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8 Reviews   12 Comments
                                     A Body Grasp the lust of another's trust and drop it in a pail. Pour on top the heavy rock and dirt dug up from Hell. Note the eye, the sclera cry and scar for future reference to see That love once earned, now a soul has burned never again to be free. Somebody was lost and his n...
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12 Reviews   10 Comments
Skill and Luck; never underestimate either!
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10 Reviews   11 Comments
Torn and Tattered Effortless we are in our individual magnificence Awaiting judgement of earned insignificance Trapped within the magic, we're doomed to believe Crumbs sifted into tattered hearts are all we seem to leave Pages and pages of spirit and soul, lines are filled Upon a slumbered mind only self will be healed How can some even begin to try to comprehend tortuous messages trapped deep within skin? One who is many, yet united is none and alone Closed minds control us as we vomit up bo...
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Short Story / So blind you can see...
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12 Reviews   18 Comments
Walking around blind with 20/20 vision
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9 Reviews   15 Comments
A voice robbed of all hope.
Non-fiction / ART
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10 Reviews   21 Comments
Creativity rocked my cradle; born ALIVE!
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