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AGE:
47
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 26
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 26
would that I be lost
never to touch my sweet muse
never to feel love
I should be grateful
if not, then to be cared for
if not, to be real
Then I would be dead
constrained, without my real flesh
constrained, by naught else
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sex in the city upon a darkened park bench like squirrels in spring
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jaded to the tree i am in my element said snake unto me
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can we write bad poems as I'm sure the others have, in critical time
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sweetly speaking; wow!!! did you know its raining here? lightning and thunder Now!!! its very loud exasperatingly so; I can’t hear you speak
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No! my mind reels in abject horror at the scent of destruction upon the edge of reality on traveled road known too oft where vice and ploy and trickery for gain are but the few ideals left to enjoy. So! enjoying the sap? this honey, that drips fearing naught the folly but that, myself for I, the fool caught in volley entrapped at the root needing to explain, this missing left foot for understanding is stronger, confusingly eager, hesitatingly longer, entrenching the soul; with parochial stigm...
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I would like to see the repitition of the two sides used a lot more through out the piece.
Love this continual reference to wisdom and or inspiration on a sensual level. Also enjoyed the illiteration in the start and hungered to see it again but alas. good over all.
Loved the protracted sustain of the reference to ceiling and looking up, creates a positive where in there is this whole lot of sadness is going on.
I found the thought compellingly so, easily able to be attached and become part of it and its direction, thankyou.
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