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AGE:
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LOC: Lawndale, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 29
LOC: Lawndale, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 29
And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom.
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Mary Sue invited me to her slumber party yesterday The girls sat on down feather pillows of discontent circling their fat with permanent markers We trimmed our fingernails to our cuticles so we couldn’t scratch for truth anymore Snipped our dry vocal chords and tied black pearls around our thin broken necks Her mother was vacuuming the living room with a martini glass in her left hand I wonder if we were much better off as we painted our dead lips ivory so they’d look pretty when we didn’t sp...
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Mary Sue invited me to her slumber party yesterday The girls sat on down feather pillows of discontent circling their fat with permanent markers We trimmed our fingernails to our cuticles so we couldn’t scratch for truth anymore Snipped our dry vocal chords and tied black pearls around our thin broken necks Her mother was vacuuming the living room with a martini glass in her left hand I wonder if we were much better off as we painted our dead lips ivory so they’d look pretty when we didn’t sp...
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I have removed the content for now because I am displeased with it, and will upload the refurbished piece when I am damn ready.
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My eyes are new this morning I want to keep you in my bones With lips that taste of cream I want to keep you under my skin With your electric fingertips The touch of you stains me Star belly boy with saucepan eyes I will lower my bell jar down over you to keep you forever near my bedside
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I have removed the content for now because I am displeased with it, and will upload the refurbished piece when I am damn ready.
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I lovelovelove this piece. It is erotic and suggestive but not overtly so where it is cheap. Beautiful imagery-- the reader can actually get a view of this woman and her body and her secrets. I particularly love this last line: "Tonight, she’s nobody’s mother nobody’s daughter nobody’s wife" It says a lot about a woman's sexuality and the constrictions that are placed on her. Your piece gives this woman a new freedom, so to speak. Well done!
First off, congratulations on getting a book "finished," and secondly for getting to the point where you have found someone who will publish it. That's a major goal I have for myself in the future, and I am so unsure of how to get there besides to WRITE. I wish I could offer you more help on this issue, but I honestly have no experience with. Good look and I hope things work out for you.
This sounds juvenile, but "I like those words you used." It gives this a sort of abstraction where it's not just another stale post in an online blog. You can only save yourself if you want to, and you are really the only one who can handle that journal.
Loved and lost what? I'm assuming love. Not necessarily true, but definitely some food for though.
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