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AGE: 18
LOC: Spring, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 19

I’m just a kid trying to figure out this thing we call writing.

I prefer writing poems over most other forms of writing, so you’ll mainly see those from me.

I’m still in high school so I’m trying to learn as much as a I can about writing before college.

if you have any constructive criticism please tell me, I want to learn!

other info…

I am a musician who mainly plays jazz or the blues.

I enjoy playing football (soccer)

history is very interesting to me.

I am currently learning Japanese and would love nothing more than to move to Japan after college, but I’ll just have to see how that pans out.

thats pretty much me in a nutshell.

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Haiku/Senryu / Timid Embraces
Version 2
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Safety on the clouds. Floating in unison. Drifting to the ground. Spinning in circles. Watching the sky smile at us. My haven’t we grown.
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Haiku/Senryu / Among Benevolence
Version 1
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Safety on the clouds. Floating in unison. Drifting to the ground. Spinning in circles. Watching the sky smile at us. My haven’t we grown.
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Haiku/Senryu / Quixotic smiles.
Version 5
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Neon City sights. No time to catch a breath now. White noise engulfs us. Escape from this place. Close your eyes and grab my hand. I will be your shield.
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Version 3
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Outside the window the embers from the cigarette burn away shyly. The remaining smoke floats through the cracks of the glass and sneak under your nose, reminding you of all you left behind. Those names that elude you, the times she gave you that look of utter contempt, the faces you recognize but choose to ignore, all but memories now. Memories drifting away with the smoke, leaving you behind in a your innocuous state of dreaming, flowing along with time out the window. Your a mile away. The ...
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Haiku/Senryu / Quixotic smiles.
Version 4
1 Review   2 Comments
Neon City sights. No time to catch a breath now. White noise engulfs us. Escape from this place. Close your eyes and grab my hand. I will be your shield. Safety on the clouds. Floating in unison. Drifting to the ground. Spinning in circles. Watching the sky smile at us. My haven't we grown.
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Poetry / First Times
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / A world without
So sorry :( That's not fun to lose a loved one.. Good overall writing, not much in the way of imagery, but it has a more sentimental feel to it. My favorite line is the one at the end, "My mother She’s gone But her stories live on To tell my daughter From this Mother’s Day and on" A very touching piece. I wish the best to you.
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Haiku/Senryu / Progress ( senryu)
This was a great piece, it's concise and to the point. Short and sweet, and puts my mind in retrospect. great work!
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