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AGE:
31
LOC: Chillicothe, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 20
LOC: Chillicothe, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 20
My name is Tiffany and I am an aspiring writer. I have been told that I have a talent for writing since I was in the third grade. I never feel that my work is great, however, other people seem to like it.
I have always expressed my feelings, thoughts, and emotions through words. This process has always been very helpful in my journey through life.
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Yellow Marigold Your blooms so brightly calling Inviting me near
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His unholy touch. My skin withers morbidly. Hidden existance.
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lavender flower intoxicating fragrance binding my senses
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subdued time, turning unrelenting salvation carry me away
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Chester Bennington lyrics on lips from heaven sing for me tonight
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Okay,I wish I could hear you rap this so that I may be able to understand the rhythem of it. However, I do believe that you have a talent for this kind of stuff. People so often rap about blood, streets, money and bitches...isn't there more to life than that? I agree the streets are hard and you have to fight your way to the top but that's not all life is about. Maybe if you included more of the struggles people endure and a little less glorification of guns and benjamins you could reach out ...
I thought this poem was absolutely beautiful. I love the inclusion of all the forest critters. There is a lot of action in this poem; which I like. Keep up the good work!
I liked this a lot....I think you should put it in the limerick section. I think it will fit in well there.
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