sarcasmspecialist's profile

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AGE: 24
LOC: Selinsgrove, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 01

I love to write non-fiction.
I also really enjoy fiction.
Poetry—not so much. I only write poetry in my emo-est of moments. Lucky for all of you, I’m emo alot.

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Version 1
1 Review   1 Comment
I needed to get back, but I had no idea where to. The array of two dimensional, monochromatic rooms kept folding me farther from my home. A plaid room where I was sitting at a table. A white room where the walls looked like cushions. A green room that reminded me of a bicycle. A blurry dark brown room that I folded too quickly through to decide what it was. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t fold back to where I belonged. My life was on paper, and someone was folding me into scenes that ...
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Short Story / The Trip
Version 2
0 Reviews   0 Comments
I needed to get back, but I had no idea where to. The array of two dimensional, monochromatic rooms kept folding me farther from my home. A plaid room where I was sitting at a table. A white room where the walls looked like cushions. A green room that reminded me of a bicycle. A blurry dark brown room that I folded too quickly through to decide what it was. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t fold back to where I belonged. My life was on paper, and someone was folding me into scenes that ...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Common Sense
Version 2
19 Reviews   2 Comments
“THESE are the times that try men's souls. The summer soldier and the sunshine patriot will, in this crisis, shrink from the service of their country; but he that stands it now, deserves the love and thanks of man and woman. Tyranny, like hell, is not easily conquered; yet we have this consolation with us, that the harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph. What we obtain too cheap, we esteem too lightly: it is dearness only that gives every thing its value. “These insightful words...
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Short Story / A Trip
Version 1
7 Reviews   5 Comments
I needed to get back, but I had no idea where to. The array of two dimensional, monochromatic rooms kept folding me farther from my home. A plaid room where I was sitting at a table. A white room where the walls looked like cushions. A green room that reminded me of a bicycle. A blurry dark brown room that I folded too quickly through to decide what it was. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t fold back to where I belonged. This was the universe, and someone was watching it unfold on a wal...
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Version 1
3 Reviews   4 Comments
You step out of my car, Dragging my heart behind you. I tell you not to call me. I hope you do. Behind these black frames, these freshly painted lashes, these blue grey eyes, these underused tear ducts, this emptiness are my emotions running black down my cheeks. I’ve never cried with mascara on before. Worn only because of the night where we shared our hearts, a bed, a thought, a moment. just hours earlier. That meant nothing to you, but everything to me. With simple words “I mean it” that w...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Butterfly
If it is true that you are only 13 years old, I've never been more impressed in my life. I was writing stuff like this when I was your age, and looking back at it, my writing was terrible. However, today alone I've read stuff by people twice my age who write much worse than you. You have such a phenomenal gift to be shaped that I'm going to keep reading your work. I really enjoyed this piece for a number of reasons. It's well written and it reminds me of a cross between X-Men and Heroes. Howe...
Romance / My Gift
This is an interesting piece. I liked it and a didn't simultaneously. I think it's one of the most well written piece I have reviewed, however the subject matter seems incredibly trite and echoes a kind of pathetic Romeo and Juliet. Love is the end all and be all of feelings and yet they're going to end it so prematurely so she can gift him her heart? Why does he need that organ? It is just an organ, despite the metaphorical and symbolic nature of it. Why would this character kill herself and...
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Encouraging, interesting, and thought-provoking. I am not entirely sure what you are trying to accomplish with this piece, however I think you have an interesting voice that should be explored. If you are indeed writing a novel about your life, and this is a reflection of your voice, it should prove to be interesting and entertaining.
Humor/Satire / Recycling
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