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AGE: 29
LOC: Minneapolis, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 11

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It was a typical beige two story house, on a typical street, with other typical beige two story houses. All the lawns were meticulously manicured. Spots of freshly planted flowers, like drips of red, blue, and pink paint stood out against the beige and green backdrop. I never quite fit in there. I was thirteen at the time, just discovering the world, and my place in it. I dreaded going to that house. It always felt cold with it's white walls and contemporary design. The paintings that hung o...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / 1/7/07 annoying rude people and such
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I am not alive to fufill your lust driven 'needs', I am am not an object to be used, nor a mat to be walked all over, not a punching bag, a person, a woman. If you think I am cold, it is because you have made me that way. I am: fragile, tender, loving, loyal, whimsical. I am a woman, I am breakable. Handle with care.
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Poetry / In the Morning
I like the concept, and some of the visuals I think it hesitates in the salt refrain. Might be "because it is the strongest in strength" it is a little repeptitive. I did like how you took the lines from the song I'll fly away to begin the next refrain
Limericks / The Purple Unicorn
Loved the way you brought current events and made them light and humorous. Not sure how the title fits though?
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I like the sarcasm and underlying tone you set. I wouldn't change anything. And I don't say that much....if ever.
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It might be ok in a story if your character is a 'typical' (I hesistate to use that word) Bible carrying, born sober again person. Otherwise, I don't think it can stand on it's own.
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