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LOC: Cathedral City, CA
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Short Story / Alabama Blues
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Today I watched my favorite movie for about the 100th time. (Biloxi Blues) and it had me think back once again to the time I was part of the military. I would be somewhere I would never expect myself to be, and places I never imagined myself to be in. One instance comes to mind, it wasn't some distant country in the middle of war, or some exotic location where I would be more than happy to go. I ended up in some part of Alabama. Have you ever passed trough a town and it made you so happy tha...
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Today I ran into an old friend, and we were talking about old times and sports and like any man it came to the point in the conversation where I had to remind him that I was better at any sport than he was and still am. "You want to put some money on that bull-shit?" He yelled over the music. "Hell yea" I replied." We chose Baseball, we grabbed a bat and ball and went to the local high school. It was one hundred dollars paid to whom ever can strike each other out first. Now I haven't pitched...
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i recently went out on a date it was the first date. we're at dinner at a nice restaurant out on the patio. a beetle lands on my shoulder and i brush it off and return to the conversation. before i finish what i was saying she looks at me and tells me to kill it. i smile and play along and jokingly reply "i should kill it, i mean the nerve of it running into me and all." there was a slight pause and she looks at me again and says "no I'm serious, i would like you to kill it." now I've killed ...
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Short Story / Nomen
i liked it. it was a much easier read than most iv'e been reading all day. it flowed well, but whats the novel going to be about just the two?
it was a bit hard to follow for me. i guess i have to read the whole novel. it flowed nicely though i could not feel to any of the characters, i suppose its not much my taste. whats the story trying to say? i might have to read it again.
haha, i wasn't sure what i was going to read when i opened this. i kept thinking to myself am i going crazy or is it just the author? it was a fun read, so i have to wonder whats next? what other piece of you body is going to make you stand back and thing how to destroy it...i want to here more storys and more killing
Short Story / Hopeful, Hopeless
i read it twice. i had trouble folowing it the first time. but the second time it was much easier. i did like it the second time around, i liked the simple format. is this going to a play or by it self? im interested in seeing more in the future.
Short Story / House on the Moon
i liked it. it was an easy read for me. i get anxuois and tend to skim, but not this one. it was a fun little story that made me remember kooky things about my own family. i really cant give anything incitfull. i just think it was one of my favorites.
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