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AGE:
15
LOC: Cincinnati, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 13
LOC: Cincinnati, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 13
Hi my name is Monica, i’m a writer, and that’s all you need to know! if you want to know more, come find out!
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Chapter One NOW As I walk quietly, or sullenly some people would call it……… I notice the looks I’m getting from some of my peers. Like I’m not supposed to be here. You couldn’t figure out my life if you tried, so please don’t waste your time. You see, everyone blames me for the death of my best friend. “ Hey freak, whatcha gonna do ? Slit my wrist, kill me too?” says some creepy Emo kid. Almost, it seemed out of thin air, Megan arrived, “ No I think that’s what you do in your spare time, you...
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My Knight on his White Horse Those long dark brown tendrils, The sun distorting their color, He’s a blonde today Those sea green eyes, I think I can see, The depths of his soul But he’ll never notice me, For my pride will never let me reveal, What I really feel, My Knight on his White Horse Those long dark brown tendrils, The sun distorting their color, He’s a blonde today Those sea green eyes, I think I can see, The depths of his soul But he’ll never notice me, For my pride will never let m...
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Chapter One NOW As I walk quietly, or sullenly some people would call it……… I notice the looks I’m getting from some of my peers. Like I’m not supposed to be here. You couldn’t figure out my life if you tried, so please don’t waste your time. You see, everyone blames me for the death of my best friend. “ Hey freak, whatcha gonna do ? Slit my wrist, kill me too?” Almost, it seemed out of thin air, Megan arrived, “ Go find something to do!! You obviously don’t have anything better to do than h...
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I think that was a bauetiful poem, with a very clear meaning. you should definitely consider going deeper onthis subject you could atteact a lot of publishers.
Wow..... I'm a fan of Edgar Allen Poe, so I autimatically took to your piece... I liked the overall concept of your piece.... you know Edgar, and Hitler, getting along, and agreeing. Although, personally I've never liked Hitler..Keep Writing!
i loved the poem, but your only mistake... was a spelling mistake... instead of "their", it should have been "there". But it was a great poem...it's true.
I loved his piece. It might have just been the way you portrayed it, i don't know. But I also liked the content. so keep working on it.. It couldn't find any grammar incorrections...sorry.
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