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AGE: 22
LOC: Pentwater, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 11

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Poetry / Breath!
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A stutter, A ripple in the atmosphere. That strand of cloud that blocks the sun only to betray the shade it hastily made over your tired and trodden form. I love dreams and the explainations behind them. I like the soul. The new and the old, scent and memory combined, folded, from the embers my forefathers created an ash nation, smudging grins on the later generation. It was a painting deceiving in nature, beautiful to the uneducated and desired heavily by the guilty minds of my peers. My fea...
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Poetry / West nile denial
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I am agony. I am the thought that spurs from antagonizing, I am an apparition that is subsequently rising from the steam you generate when you breath. Create something, say something different than the normal fasade between your split lips, just listen, I am the vision you see when you dream oh so lonely. I am emptiness in the purest of forms, extracted from the bones of the souls less fortunate, I found an opportune time to strike and embed myself in your heart, your eyes, your tongue, I am ...
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Poetry / 15 years old
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4 Reviews   2 Comments
The sweetest yes my heart skipped some pulses, horses raced through the veins to my eyes, sporadic images of lips, processed kisses, feel, enjoy, repeat...Despise. Disguise the laughter with open eyes transfixed in mine I saw some lies They paralyze oh even deeper, If I cannot find her amidst the fields then how am I my lover's keeper? I fell for weeks inside a chasm of broken glass orgasmic pain Stained my sweater it kept getting wetter with every shard that kissed my skin. But I don't screa...
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Poetry / Writing plight
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A letter sent ink split from seperate ends the pen has spent days hovering almost giving in to the temptation of the writer's least important friend, reality and the blocks it forms.. Indecisive is an understatement when faced with empty parchment with which to fill with words, sometimes he scribbles and tears it to pieces just to say he got something done.. Where do you go and what do you do when you get to the place in your head? Better is a word that describes all his works, with a could b...
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It seems today was the day to lose the race, your expressions ruled me, I'm drooling over promiscuity, All that's left is just to spit it your way. For the fame in the world wasn't enough for this girl, who in the midst of progress against digression, dismissed those moments that were truely affection, for an argument, the cheap smell of a non monogomous nature left her sad again. Yea she has friends that love her. I'm sure the consoling found its way into her mind like fitness, and she excer...
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Haiku/Senryu / Poets
Very nice wording in this one. Mind bender really it is. I wish more people could see writers as an important part of sociality. Without us, there would be no movies or great times at said movies with loved ones and friends.
Poetry / Candy Lips
The form of your writing really reflects what I think is an overall disappreciation of the world. Not a bad thing by any means, because sadness is a pens best friend. Very nice I actually found myself exclaiming a few of the lines. In the back of a strangers van, now that line had some power. It's a great thing to be real and not sugar coat things.
I like the description of the scenes, people and sorroundings. You have what to me looks like a very fresh writing style, fresh but still tied together with a lot of great authors I've read from. Very introspective piece, intelligent characters, which is obviously proven by their subjects of conversation. I like how the narration doesn't sully their interaction as well.
Hahaha. I find this hilarious, just because of the buildup of somebody maybe being naked or something, but then cannabalism kicks in and so does the humor in my opinion.
Speedy piece, maybe a few more words to the lines would make it a bit better in my opinion. Great message as well.
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