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LOC: Winter Park, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 30
LOC: Winter Park, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 30
I’m not an accomplished writer, or even a very good one, but I think it’s important that people write, even if they’re not that good at it.
I don’t have much, well, any sympathy for people who put themselves out there to be reviewed and are thin skinned about it. I realize that one’s written work is like their baby, but if you’re going to put your baby’s picture on the internet and solicit opinions, eventually someone’s going to tell you that you have one butt ugly baby.
I have no problem with people telling me that what I have written sucks (including this profile) because it’s just words and opinions. Everybody has a right to let them fly.
I am a bit of a purist about spelling and grammar because, to me, people who write to …
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there are several good points made in this piece, but they are all over the board: Antibacterials are bad; Many people exercise more to look fit than to actually be healthy; Censorship is bad; Pharmaceutical remedies for undesirable mental states are an accepted part of our culture; Alcohol can kill you; There are annoying people in bars; Legislating morality is not generally effective. oh, and Disney sucks. There's a thread of anti-political correctness and anti-homogenization running throug...
okay. like, i cannot begin to do justice to what i've just read. but, it's there, and i'm here, and you put it out there, and the shere, raw, truth, reality, brutal sensitive vitality of what you are delivering is fucking inspired. the world of individuals who don't function in the functional world but immerse themselves in cold, hard REALITY, where people are fragile but vicious, insane but aware, compassionate but selfish, and USE and get USED, and KNOW,whether they want to acknowledge it o...
wow. this is an intense piece. screaming pain, horror, endless woe. inner being crushed into dust. any of the times i've ever felt guilty about my past or experienced a sense of dread about what dreams may come when i have shuffled off this mortal coil, seem like a disney cartoon compared to this. there are few adjustments i would recommend, but they don't seem important. the impact is strong. sheer, unadulterated misery. the prospect of eternal vengeance from a cruel master with an iron-claw...
grammatically, i think it would read better if you said "my mother warned me to wear clean underwear". Otherwise, it almost sounds like she was warning against wearing clean underwear. also, i'm not sure if it's intended or not, but the second and third sentence bear virtually no logical relationship to the opening statement "I hope to die naked." Let me explain. Firstly, to say "I hope to die naked" implies that you assume that you probably won't have a lot to say about this issue when the t...
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