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Jennifer was a classic blonde, she warned me of that. I was nervous, more so than usual. She even had nails. We had met online 6 months prior, had chatted, volleyed a few honest and autobiographical emails, and even exchanged text messages before she decided to become exclusively involved with another man. On one particular evening several months later I apparently sent an email that said, “Are you single yet?” The reply came nearly a month later. She was, although a bit heartbroken. This pro...
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I'm a bit lost on this, and am not sure where/what it is I'm to be imagining; what is the 8 and the 0? Are these shapes carved in the ice? Who is the other person? The 'hypnotic your path' and 'you enticed' are stumbling blocks in the rhythm. The longing is there, it works: two ships passed in the night. The Feel is there. Hope this is helpful.
I know this house...(but I don't know what "Haiku/Senryu-Overall" means in the rating scheme above) The site below states that the tanka is a 5 line, 31 syllable poem generally used to evoke an occasion/event with concision, arranged in the following pattern: 5 7 5 7 7 http://www.americantanka.com/about.html I'm assuming that a variation on the required syllables exists; I'm seeing 3 5 3 5 5 There is an empty feeling to this, which works. Might there be another way to evoke the repetetive/bor...
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