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LAST LOGIN: September 15
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My name is Terry Reschke. I am the author of “A Dragon’s Birth” and “The Attic Above” Which will be out soon.
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The betrayal of Tamar By: Terry Reschke Intro: As Serqua walked along the now crumbled marble pillars that had once surrounded and protected his beloved homeland of Tamar he remembered only his people’s pride. Now only a small handful of his kind still remained they were mostly farmers and young children. Even the massive estate of his father (Transton) was completely destroyed. The very place he had trained and grew up was now reduced to nothing more than a pile of rubble. Undoubtedly this ...
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Ver intreaging. You give great discriptions throughout this story. It makes me feel like I am actually part of the whole story. It is easily captivating and entrancing. Just what a publisher would be looking for. The characters seem believable as well as mostly likable. Definately keep up the work on this one. I think that there is a good market for this type of story out there. You keep the readers attention throughout it as well. You have action combined with a believable setting that rings...
Very well put. The struggle to find the right words. Not wanting to lay it all out there for everyone. I get it nice job.
When you wrote the 6th. line you should have put (to hide). You ask questions without getting answers as well. I understand about questioning the anger and such but you should try to rework it and find answers as well.
For me this did not have a good flow to it as poetry for me should contain. I get what you are trying to say in this piece but I feel that you could have done it in a far better way.
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