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AGE: 15
LOC: Grove City, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 05

ummm, im 14 years old and i am in high school this year. i have been clinicaly diagnosed with depression, which i am getting over, as well as asthma, but thats not really important. _ . I love to read, i love to write poetry, and i love when someone reads my poems and tells me what they think. most of my poetry is “dark” and some of my friends and family are not supportive, so i just wanted to know what other people think. thank you!

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Poetry / Floating
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I sit here Floating into darkness Going further and further Down. All senses fail Yet I feel the fire Grazing against my skin Like red-hot razorblades. I feel nothing but anger, Anger from the very bottom Of all the pits of hell Along with the anger from my soul Floating further, And further… Down, Until I hit. With all the force they could summon I hit, and with the impact, I begin to feel once more. I smell their fear, An almost tangible emotion. That is when the stench is most noticeable, ...
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Poetry / Time
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The things we do together, The time we spent. Mixing worlds With a magic spoon. Reading to me Late at night, To tell me everything Will be fine. Putting a little bit of your love In every stitch, To make me Your princess once more. Waking early, And making Enough food, For an army Of family and loved ones. The time we spend Every year, Rolling dough, Making cakes Or cookies. It’s ours to enjoy, It can’t be taken away. I won’t let it. They wonder how it could Taste so good.... It has grandmas ...
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Poetry / Untouchable
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I am with you Yet so far away. A smile Plastered on my face. I wish I were somewhere else Anywhere really. Its not you, It’s just that There is a wall between us. And even though you put it there, I have continued To build upon it. Enforcing the barrier, Until I am untouchable. You snap at me, And the smile fades away. In its place is the salty, Bitter taste Of tears. You don’t know it, But you have done the unthinkable. Pulled me out of my comfort And made me face the world. I try to continu...
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Poetry / Invisible
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I stand, Invisible to you. Seen only whilst in flaw. Unspoken words Hurt the most, Like icy daggers, To the throat. I choke them Down For as long As I can stand, But once more You see me, Crying, And silently make The smallest wish. I see it In your all telling eyes. My thoughts, Hidden from you. My tears go un-caught Throughout the night, As my silent screams continue, But nothing Is heard by you. I cry out, But no one is there. You call me naive, Yet my thoughts Are beyond comprehension To ...
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Poetry / Where I’m From
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I’m from books and music. Parties and games Playing in the rain Running barefoot In the woods Catchy comebacks Solemn glares And backwards glances. I’m from flesh and blood. My mom’s face, My dad’s toes. Food and comfort Family and fun. Good times and bad. My mom’s old room With open windows, Breathing in the night. It all makes me stronger. The heart is where I’m from.
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Children's / Mice City
I think this is a very cute storyline. It would be great if you did something to the effect oh him building little mice tools and giving them to the mice to help them out, and then it would be like everyone works together. It would have a little moral stuck in there too. Well, i hope that you have luck keeping the story flowing, but i dont think that you will have any trouble, the storyline is very open to changes and twists and such.
Poetry / Untitled
I like how there is subtle rhyming, but it doesnt sound like you had to think of words that would rhyme, just the words you wanted to use where perfect for that spot. I think that it takes stregnth to write about things like this, it is sometimes uncomfortable to write down such raw emotions or memories such as these. I really like your poem.
Poetry / India Calling
I like the way this poem portrays your view about India. It paints an awsome picture in my head and makes me wonder about what it would be like there.
Poetry / My Children
if this is a true story, i am so sorry. Its an excellent poem and i think that it gives of the feeling of raw despair and the longing to hold your abused children. it gives the feeling of confusion to me also, like why would someone hurt the ones they take in for foster care? what kind of people would do that? i hope that everything works out, and continue writing because it helps to get out how you feel.
Poetry / What do I say?
I think that this poem was very easy to understand and i like the meaning it gives me. to me its sort of saying that with love comes more than good things: with the loss of love you have horrible pain and then its harder to find real love again. i think this is an overall great poem.
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