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  vestiges of men haunt the inside of mcswinnigan’s   where the bartenders know your name, a familiarity making the situation more pathetic and each order becomes personal through careful cultivation, deliberate evenings spent under stagnant smoke summers at mcswinnigan’s are always the same: sunlit late with lights dimmed low and every single day, every swiveled seat is filled with the worst of what new york city has to offer: silent men bent so low over chilled steins ...
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( r ) evolutionary testimony: blind nature, NOT! an “intelligent overseer,” controls a world dangerously charged with ideology, founded by religion, seeking to teach a “comforting” g o d c o n c e p t. Fellow Christians, Discovery! religious faith is bad poetry with not a flicker of Intellectual Honesty. or truth, a commercialized ideological Monopoly on children;; merely a safe harbor for ideas that are At Best mistaken and At Worst—dangerous. To weaken the hold of religion may be our greate...
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part I early, I awake. I reach outwards, his breathing echoes in my ears. I am surrounded; enveloped by him, his legs cover mine with a strength I may never know. Does is get better? part II early, I awake. she is so near, how lucky I am; I am filled. her grace enters me, replacing oxygen with pure bliss. Does it get better?
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( r ) evolutionary testimony: blind nature, NOT! an “intelligent overseer,” controls a world dangerously charged with ideology, founded by religion, seeking to teach a “comforting” g o d c o n c e p t. Fellow Christians, Discovery! religious faith is bad poetry with not a flicker of Intellectual Honesty. or truth, a commercialized. ideological. Monopoly. on children;; merely a safe harbor for ideas that are At Best mistaken and At Worst—dangerous. To weaken the hold of religion may be our gre...
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Poetry / April 29th, 1945
This poem is beautifully worded, and uses fantastic imagery. The title is very relevant, which is not easily accomplished, and brought my mind instantly to World War II. The bringing up of Hitler's capacity to love at the end of the poem was particularly moving, and while unexpected, did arouse some emotions for Hitler. My only criticism of this poem would be that the shaping of the words does not seem to add to the poem at all, or to make sense in terms of the words you used. Nonetheless, a ...
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