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AGE: 39
LOC: Siloam Springs, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 04

I’m a stay at home mom by choice. I love home schooling my two miracle boys. I love learning, writing poetry, reading, journaling, scrapbooking, and quilting. I’m all about good relationships. Good and bad things happen to all of us, but those who are strong of heart will not allow circumstances to determine their response. The one thing all humans have is power of choice on how to respond. I want my responses to always be guided by love and not self preservation.

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Poetry / SITTING OUT TIME
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SITTING OUT TIME I’m a stagnant pond with algae on top Waiting for the rushing river to capture my soul The fast moving water would sweep away debris In a constant cleansing flow I sat on my peaceful park bench of time Seeing the current in my present condition Hearing the power of purity Just beyond the point of imagination and vision I shake my head in tired frustration At the rousing reality that I can’t make myself new Although I have a hope in tomorrow Today, there isn&rsquo...
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Poetry / BEING NOBODY
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BEING NOBODY Sometimes I work the system Trying to raise myself above debasement I don’t want to be at the top I just hate living below ………..where no one can see me Sometimes I mention my education Trying to get important people to notice me I don’t want to be a leader I just hate being clumped in a crowd ……….where no one can see me Sometimes I show compassion to the hurting Trying to love where all else has failed I don’t want to be...
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Poetry / LOSING MY LIFE
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LOSING MY LIFE I left my childhood home of pearly white To join my god-given mate at sea He left his boat of ill repute To travel on a beautiful ocean liner with me I must admit, I was taken aback When he took my seat and took my wheel Pride will be a problem But his appearance on my ship seemed a good deal I looked back to the dock we left And saw a very strange sight Couples demolished their vessels To build one from two, but not without a fight I thought maybe we should go back And do what...
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LEARNING ENJOYMENT I wished I could savor a cup of hot cocoa Or frolic in a field of daises I’d like to run a horse in green pastures Or have mountains of work to do, but choose to be lazy I’d like to take a hot bath with scented oils And have the smell of incense choke out all sounds I would like to relax on my bed of sorrows Teaching my heart to smile and forgetting how to frown I would like to have pleasant conversations with neighbors And healthy relationships with neighbors and friends I...
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THE NORMAL FORMULA If I could stand beneath the Eifel tower Or be in the circus, for just one day All the wrong would be made right And I could finally see life in a normal way If I could be surrounded by adoring lovers Or have rivers of laughter for my buckets of tears All the wrong would be made right And I could finally live my life in normal years If I could desire only what I needed to live Or want just the things I never got All the wrong would be made right And I could finally see what...
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Poetry / Untitled 1
Dang! Can we say revenge? POWERFUL and PERFECT!!! The only reason I gave this poem an 8 is because of my personal beliefs about revenge. Your imagery and expression is unique and clear. I can see deep black, red, some orange, blue. I see you. I'm going to walk away from my computer today saying, "I read an awesome poem today." shemetls
Poetry / ramblings
I see the image your creating, but some colors are bold, and others so dim you can barely see them. It makes the picture unbalanced. For example, "Illegible letters saying ,'good bye,' but cannot be read, for our hands are shackled freedoms dead," is so powerful, it thunks you in the head. But then, the two lines you read together, "Is this the real world or just imaginary? Have I been corrupted by billboards and neon signs?" seem to take the reader away from the focus of growing up in a chao...
Poetry / Crevices to Bear
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I'm not really a fan of Sci-Fi though I would read anything Orson Scott Card writes. So, I am honored that you would like me to review your work, but I feel that I would not do you justice. I am a poet who is writing an autobiography, but I don't really consider myself a writer. Thank you for your consideration. I gave you 5s on everything, not because that's my evaluation of your work, but becasue I had to give you a number. I did not rate you really.shemetls
Romance / Never Letting Go
Poetry is not about throwing up feelings. I want to KNOW the pain of loss. I want to KNOW the depth of your love for this woman. The only way to cause someone else to feel what you are feeling is to invite them to suffer with you...in a way the reader can't exists. For example, "She glided into my life like a ghost from Christmas past. Her soft locks of hair brushed my check as she whisked away all hope from my heart." Can you see the picture, though words are all you are seeing?" Try again, ...
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