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AGE: 31
LOC: Charlotte, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 24

My name is Shohreh Shokouhfar, I like writing poetry as well as reading them too.  I listen to music, dance and build web pages as well.  Here is my web page http://www.pearlsofmygarden.com .  Please look at it and don’t forget to vote for your favorite poetry.

Thanks,
Shohreh

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Poetry / Blow Your Wind On To Me
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Credo Oct 18, 05 Blow Your Wind On To Me Oh God Blow your wind On to me Let your wind bring me healing and joy Oh Lord blow me away to your paradise Oh wind of God Blow me away to the land of eternity Oh wind of paradise Come to me Oh winds of God come to me Oh wind of love Come to me Oh wind of love Come to me And blow your wind On to me from the Heavenly Paradise Oh God let me be in your paradise The eternal world The land of virtual reality Where there is your own world Where there is peac...
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Children's / Prologue
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Children's / Monster Under The Bed
by J_Lynn
I liked it very much, and at the last line "Why is my sock stuck to his tooth?", is funny. I bet your daughter would like this poem. Take care, Shohreh
Children's / Lu's Blue Shoe
by tmhollis
I like the tone of voice you use for the poem Lu's Blue Shoe. It is perfect for children poem. It sounds great, you did a wonderful job. Shohreh http://www.urbis.com/shohreh
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Stage Play / Pain behind a smile
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Children's / Monster Under The Bed
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