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AGE: 33
LOC: Fountain, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 16

Hi Im 32 and I like to write words that produce a response or atleast an image. Beauty can be found all around If one only knows where to find it..but you have to start with self and that is why Im here. Looking to grow as a (self proclaimed) poet.Im open to many things so feel free and enjoy my work.I am hoping to write a book and this could be just the place to start. I thank you in advance.
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Poetry / HANDS OF TIME...
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Hands of time THE HANDS OF TIME HAVE COME TOGETHER MY LOVE PAIN OF SUCH MAGNITUDE ONLY TWO HEARTS HAVE FELT, ONE SURVIVED AND THE OTHER BEATS ALONE, YET IT MELTS. HOW THEN CAN I ADMIT THE SHALLOW WATERS OFF LOVES SHORES IS WHERE I LOST MY SOUL AMIST THE SUPERNATURAL? I SEE WITH MY MINDS EYE SHORT SIGHTED AS I MAY THAT THE UNIVERSE IS ENCLOSED IN A BOX WRAPPED FOR YOU AND ME.
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Poetry / I HAVE ARRIVED
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I HAVE ARRIVED I have arrived between the twilight of the night and immediately fixed my gaze on your thighs. My eyes lost in the moment as my mind takes a hold of your hand and walks you over to the room where candles dance across the wall and caress your shoulder blades as the strap of your dress falls down to your arm. I motion gently towards your neck line with the curve of your lips in plain view. I want you. I’m startled by your intense stare as I move somewhat like a slow passing breez...
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Poetry / Destiny
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DESTINY My destiny is uncharted. I am followed by the memories of you. Haunted by the image of love’s smile and shamed by lusts portrayal of me. Your mere touch inspires my vision of the moon as it past me. I strain at best yet fall short of laying sight of you. Where does love go when the curtain is drawn and passions caress leaves GOD’s ordain place of rest? Raise the flame that brings the sun and the moon as one. Is the cosmos by design of its own interpretation? Did passion blindly run am...
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Poetry / Hands of time...
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THE HANDS OF TIME HAVE COME TOGETHER MY LOVE PAIN OF SUCH MAGNITUDE ONLY TWO HEARTS HAVE FELT, ONE SURVIVED AND THE OTHER BEATS ALONE, YET IT MELTS. HOW THEN CAN I ADMIT THE SHALLOW WATERS OFF LOVES SHORES IS WHERE I LOST MY SOUL AMIST A SUPERNATURAL FLOW I SEE WITH MY MINDS EYE SHORT SIGHTED AS I MAYBE THAT THE UNIVERSE IS ENCLOSED IN A BOX WRAPPED FOR YOU AND ME.
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Poetry / Destiny
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DESTINY My destiny is uncharted. I’m followed by the memories of you, Haunted by the image of love’s smile and shamed by lusts portrayal of me. Your mere touch inspires my vision of the moon as it past me…I strain at best yet fall short of laying sight of you. Where does love go when the curtain is drawn and passions caress leaves GOD’s ordain place of rest? Raise the flame that brings the sun and the moon as one. Is the cosmos by design of its own interpretation or did passion blindly run am...
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What can I say. I love the work. I share the feelings of the writer. Reminds me of street knowledge gained only by failure after failure and final triumph. Life throws curve balls at us all. Its how we handle them that makes us who we are and what we will be. I fully understand with great clarity and this is definitely poetry. I look further to more of your work. Thank you.
Poetry / What Do You See
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Poetry / Painting Walls
Your poetry speaks as one who has seen many things. I love the color that you put in your poetry not only by the words but the desciptive manner that you are writing. You sound or the character sounds as though she is well traveled and one whom time has kept a careful eye upon.Very nice work and thank you for sharing.
Haiku/Senryu / Add To Favourities!
Wow what a powerful phrase," make love to my words". You have captured me with three lines where as I attempt to capture the readers imagination with multiple illustrations. Nice work. I also appreciate that you took the time to define your terms. Good Job. I applaud you.
Horror / Missing Persons
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