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AGE: 33
LOC: Ramona, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 18
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Poetry / For Friendship
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A silent word A statement with so much meaning Yet unclear Unknown I wander, peering at the walls of my question Why? Why is it that relationships must be confined by these rules? A silent word A thought only known to you Clear Known You wander, sure of the question that I peer at Why? Is there a reason why I can't be true to my urges? Is there a fault in my decision to reach out? For Friendship..... I seek the thoughts of a gifted mind An open space filled with insight and color A place wher...
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Here we go again On another trip Another word From your mouth Slipped And I smile again The stage is set For another show A place to paint Your empty words I sit and wait And I prepare For the beautiful letdown Chorus: Oh, the beautiful letdown How it always comes around Always here between us Waiting in your absence Oh, the beautiful letdown Oh, the beautiful letdown Another pretty day I contemplate All too familiar A little bit late I smile again Don't you see That you said those words I si...
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Novel Treatments / My God Story
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It's not a common occurrence to wake up in the morning and plan for disaster. Planning for disaster is generally the last thing on anyone's mind. It is safe to say that on Sunday, October 21st, 2007, disaster was just a memory for me, a wave of emotions rooted in the past of 2003. I'm going to describe a story that is unbelievable and amazing. This is a concurrent narration of two stories that have changed me, and have given me hope. As I reflect, a feeling of wholeness is overtaking my bein...
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Lyrics / SOUND
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WHY DO I FEEL THIS WAY THE DIM LIGHTS TAKE ME AWAY MEMORIES LIKE FINGERPRINTS REMIND ME OF MYSELF ONCE TAKEN BY THE HAND OF DECEIT MY ILL FATED TRUST CRUMBLES TO DUST LEAVING ME TO FEAR MYSELF MY LOVE MY ONLY LOVE CHORUS: AND THE WIND TAKES ME DOWN BUT I DARE NOT MAKE A SOUND ALL THIS TALK AROUND TOWN BUT I DARE I DARE I DARE NOT MAKE A SOUND SHADOWS OF MY CHILDHOOD HAUNT ME TAKING ME BACK THE TEARS THAT STAINED MY ROSY CHEEKS MY WEAKNESS MY ONLY WEAKNESS CHORUS
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / My God Story
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It's not a common occurrence to wake up in the morning and plan for disaster. Planning for disaster is generally the last thing on anyone's mind. It is safe to say that on Sunday, October 21st, 2007, disaster was just a memory for me, a wave of emotions rooted in the past of 2003. I'm going to describe a story that is unbelievable and amazing. This is a concurrent narration of two stories that have changed me, and have given me hope. As I reflect, a feeling of wholeness is overtaking my bein...
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Poetry / Meddle
This felt incomplete, like it was not finished.. I can't seem to get the point to what you are stating.. You need more lines to bring out your statement.. To me, this is just a set of random lines..
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I love this! It was easy to read, and flowed smoothly into my mind! I really enjoyed the ending, and how it brought the poem together. I don't have much to say.. Just that I love it! Thanks for sharing! Singtome
Poetry / dear daddy
First, I'd like to kindly let you know that I hope you heal from your pain in regards to your Father. It sounds like you've had a lot of friction with him.. In regards to the poem. I highly reccomend that you use correct spelling for your words.. Its hard to read this seriously with the words "why" spelled as "y", etc... This is a piece that is reflecting a lot of emotion, and its obvious that your pain needs to be heard.. I think it would be heard better using correctly spelled words. Just m...
I really feel that this is something I can relate to.. "WITH EARPHONE HEADS AND DIRTY NECKS".... Something so clear and common here in Ramona.. Steve's son is this way!! What has happened to our children? They can't live without some type of electronic device to survive high school anymore!! Cell phone, playstation.. laptop!! WHAT?? Crazy.. I love this! I read some words I have never heard.. :) I'll be sure to look them up! :) Being a country girl, its easy to pass them up! :) Thanks so much ...
Lyrics / "FOREVER"
This is a good love song, and basic and to the point. I'm curious what genre you would put this to... I can hear it with an R&B flavor and some nice dance beats.. :) Thanks for sharing! singtome
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