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AGE:
28
LOC: Huntington, WV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 18
LOC: Huntington, WV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 18
I have been writing since I was 6 years old. During the past few years, I have slacked off a lot, but I hope to get back into the swing of things…
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It was late on a weekend night when my world tremendously shifted for the first time in my life. I was working at Taco Bell; I was trying to finish my cleaning tasks so I could go home when I looked up to see my best friend walk into the restaurant. She was followed by two others. Why did they all look so gloomy, I pondered as they approached? They moved like zombies: slow, confused and without purpose. The three of them roamed to the counter, and my best friend mumbled, “They found Isaiah’s ...
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Reflections of chocolate, no wait, let’s try again Reflections of blue skies, white beaches, and tents Popped like jars of baby food. The magazine of chocolate arrives home with my toddler, The fun(d) raising begins. When I was a kid… Teachers didn’t send this stuff home Until 1st grade. He isn’t even Two. His mouth like an untouched petal from a flower on the floor of some forest which will never be seen by my eyes alone. They want him to sell goodies- He can’t even talk, can a salesman make...
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Nature despises the greed for selfish pleasures and paper airplanes
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Butterflies frolick with grasses of perfection; New discovery
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Red and wilted fear of aspirations destroyed Beauty is hopeless
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An ED is certainly an overwhelming obsession, and I can understand the need to write about something so consuming. The realness of this piece is good. It portrays the inner turmoil of a person suffering from an eating disorder. However, there are a few spelling errors and the flow of the poem is a bit choppy. Writing can be an excellent way to deal with something so traumatic and overwhelming as an ED, but it can be hard to portray too much emotion when one is so focused on a different area o...
I certainly never expected to be captivated by a story about an infected digit, but you've done so with this one. I think its very well-written with an excellent attention to detail. It reminds me of something that I would read in a short story collections book; even though there is a bit of blood and guts feeling, it doesn't come across as sickening. Keep writing!
I think that this poem has fantastic imagery. As I read it, I can truly see the actions taking place, the shoe slipping off of the toes and the feel of the grass & steel (concrete)? Anyway, it is a well-formed writing and I like it.
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