is this true? you asked a hobo out? hehe. i dont think anyone would turn down a writer like you! i think it is fantastic!

Warms up my heart. its very sweet. its nice for you to write that for your friend.

i wish i could say the same thing... great poem!

its weird in a GREAT way. i mean, how many clouds cry after falling down?hahaha.

i like it. did you write it just because? or is it supose to mean something?

it reminds me of when i go to concerts and there is someone standing next to me singing totally off key. i dont know why. but i like it because its funny to think of that.

i like it. its funny. i hate myspace. but i dont think that has anything to do with it. hahaha.

i like it. its true. praying wont do anything for money! its hard to save up money.

i LOVE IT! its Pure reality! its so true, the whole thing! my mom is always saying that she will never retire because of the money thing.i love it!

i thought it had a lot of meaning to it. it made me think about the poem minutes after. its cool. i liked it.