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AGE: 24
LOC: Atlanta, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 23

i talk when im ready and write just the same, it comes out in blurts, splurts and sometimes profane…(I’ll try to keep it clean though(, jessus is my homie and writing is my puff and blow…

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Poetry / Waitin Room
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6 Reviews   1 Comment
  I waited for you, I sat up form the burnt orange of a new day until the burnt orange of a new day. I tried . you repay my diligence with the tale that I SHOULD wait on you that your back is my ultimate frontal view? how dare you. wait, I'M waiting on YOU? quizically I view myself internally realized the one getting played to the left is me. I cant believe I waited on you. as I look around the waiting room I see people waiting on you is nothing new, so I grab my bag and tired f...
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Poetry / como?
Version 1
2 Reviews   1 Comment
I needed you, and without a thought to any judgement I believed you... Why did I believe you? I needed help and as I poured my heart out about my mother who had a stroke, you told me about the butterflies in your stomach when she entered the room. I needed you. But trying to be the friend that I am, I listend and gave the best advice i could, ( don't rush; have fun;blah blah blah). but when i had the flu you didnt even call to check on me, ( well, you did that time you were waiting for her to...
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Poetry / Confusing
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2 Reviews   5 Comments
Confusing I don’t know where I’m to go, I imagined myself not going far without you. I believed that what we have is special, But you’re showing me it’s not special enough. I allowed you to peek into my closet and I exposed the skeletons hidden there. You told me that you didn’t care, But that didn’t mean you didn’t care. I shared with you the most important, Scary and otherwise embarrassing things that I have Done to show you that I am trying to trust you. There isn’t much else I can do, Bec...
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this is a beautiful poem! I love the simplicity of it. This is simoething i would like to say to a husband.
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this is a great report for all writers. irs wonderfully written due to the writing deaths, aurthor and beautiful pieces, found lying cold and hard on the floor.
Poetry / BORICUA PRIDE
i have never seen a spanish poem quite like this.. It was refreshing to see that you used spanish with no hesistatnt.( I understood what you said, although my spanish is limited,) but their are many that dont. and dont want to learn... They are just happy that spanish people are blessed with beautful skin and a great sense of pride... I didnt know about the slavery thing, although its not surprising. This makes me want to go ahead and research the little country of puerto rico.