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peach rose blossoms unfold sweet fully as do I for you in L.O.V.E. within each petal symbolizes me you can feel the warmth through these eyes of mine these hands shall hold you through eternity’s time upon us God has breathed a long lasting relationship new beginnings reached with each touch of our lips history made with each bounce of our hips I have never seen another really which completes my sentences mentally almost as if we are a combined entity ghost whisperers if you will deal or no d...

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be published in a book of poetry

Agent - I need an agent

Poetry - Overall

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by sagittarius1212

dear Creator, love has its way of showing up and leaving...maybe love is trying to show different aspects of itself to you using different relationships...I see the hope and feel the emotion inside these lines... Within this lifetime all that I seek is this with my eyes wide open surely, I’ll find BLISS. great way to instill emotion...

by nelson1

dear Creator, this is a very concept indeed...I too am an artist and definitely "bare my soul in harmony." as well...good luck in this opportunity...

by Doctor_Rat

dear Creator, this was very humorous..."Standing thoughts in line."...could definitely see a real haiku police force...imagery was great..."Rounding up stray syllables,"

by Sweettouch

dear Creator, the muse is definitely a writer's soul....and indeed the sould needs pleasing at times... "I attempt to dicipher her temptuous ways I speaking garble she speaking gray"...great concept here...I enjoyed...

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