smoketoyachoke's profile
AGE:
19
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 25
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 25
I am Ruben ,but I prefer people call me SMOKE when online. I’m about 5’9 and skinny but not ashamed of it. I’m of Spanish origin ,half being Puerto Rican and other half Mexican.
I’m an artist that can be found deviantart.com , and I’m here mainly to write my Lyrics and see what people have to say about them. I’m friendly and am respectable , I would try to reply to anyone that comments or reviews my material. I don’t hate on other’s work but I give credit to people when earned.
I’m always expanding my musical interests and like to read others’ lyrics. -SMK
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Its so sad how we all think that there's greater cause or something in the near future thats better to look foward to. There's life everywhere and yet and it's nowhere to be found when you search for it. You'll search and find some signs of life, believe that there is finally a break from this boredom and obsecurity. It's not what you're lead to believe, it's there, but if you think again you'll know something isn't right. So you let it decieve. It works its way in. You enjoy a ray of sunshi...
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As the title goes....yet another one. Another person that was close to me was left. Two this month....it looks like the road is long too. I don't want it, I really don't need it. Lonliness. It's all I've known and likely the only thing I will. The pain hurts, a livid wound similar to a final blow to an enemy that is about to be dispelled. I don't know how. I don't know why. It must a curse that haunts me, or is it just me? What the HELL?! I believe my feeling and my ways of being too honest w...
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I won't have any respect left if she does let herself be taken. Why does this happen to the innocent so easily? .....Taken advantage of Only one thing is desired and it's not even you! These things you believe aren't even half-truths, (Majority) there is sweet talk to lure you in. Sweet nothings. (they got you hopelessly falling deeper.) I want to save you (I do.) Where were you when I was in the same abyss? The sideline. (though I don't blame you at all.) I guess we both gave and recieved su...
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You never look at me without judging me ,you stare without a cause. You kill me more inside with the fact that you don't care about anything else except what's on the out side of me. How are we supposed to live things like this? You are a burden to me even though your not mine. You are so deep inside yourself that you never so me any affection ,no letters of love , no phone calls , and no kisses or holding my hand . You are always so buzy chasing some ambition I 'll likely never understand ....
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[Not Blind] Cast down your demons. Show me yourself , show me the true form of you. SHOW ME. Show me what it is that you have go-ing inside. To spend one day in another person's life. The psychic mind will uncover all that you've suffered in this life. I will see what you've enjoyed the ex-tacy. Not blind! I will burn by the blow you have taken also. (Chorus)My eyes are open so why are you hoping that I won't see ? Not blind! Hoping for darkness ,your words all sound heartless....but I'm stil...
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I like what you are doing here as far as raising awareness and helping to persuade people that sexual harassment needs to be dealt with nation-wide. Personally I agree on everything but I noticed that there aren't any mentionings of males being sexually harassed by females. As rare as we all know it is, it still should be shown that it does exist as well. So maybe if you can find a report about that, you should add it in ths article as well. I think you are "on-point" with your writing skills...
I respect the title name, because I thinkit's witty and seems appropriet. I like McCandless's idea of escaping the normal life was. I think the closing was justified, it's like were all committing suicide when knowing the fact that we're all sleep deprieved.I think this was quite good and now it's got me thinking more that I should sleep more. You should be more persistant in your message, make more people realize what's bring this world down. -SMK
This sound really good, but it was so short that it left people wanting more. (hopefully it wasn't made to be that way.) Couldn't you have explained to immortal gift? It's strange because I thought the female was mortal. -SMK
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