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LOC: Fords, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 12
LOC: Fords, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 12
the only man who ever put pen to paper who is, was, or ever will matter is a man named Jason Hunter a.k.a. the Rebel INS Inspektah Deck of the Wu-Tang Clan..
I puts the needle to the groove, I gets rude
And I’m forced to fuck it up
My style carries like a pickup truck
Across the clear blue yonder
Seek the China Sea, I slam tracks like quarterbacks sacks from L.T.
Now why try and test, the Rebel INS?
Blessed since the birth, I earth-slam your best
Cause I bake the cake, then take the cake
and eat it, too, with my crew while we head state to state!
as somebody attempting to interpret his wandering inspirations during late-night reality freezes onto tree bark or Windows Notebook(c.)... with humble talents or lack of instruct…
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give forth the age of the new emperors the houses have gone too dry the parks are as empty they're inside bring back a day of true revelers what i see in my mind its what they want its alright? overt onslaught simplization manipulation proove safen desophistication a straight forward answer better left unsaid
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give forth the age of the new emperors the houses have gone too dry the parks are as empty they're inside bring back a day of true revelers what i see in my mind its what they want its alright? overt onslaught simplization manipulation proove safen desophistication a straight forward answer better left unsaid
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give forth the age of the new emperors the houses have gone too dry the parks are as empty they're inside bring back a day of true revelers what i see in my mind its what they want its alright?
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i’m sick of urbis no one likes my shit i’m sick of curses and wannabe twits you all sound the same you’re all fucking lame no one reviews my stuff and i’m the one to blame
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brad's so rad with a side you don't see he likes Billy Joel and he loves "Gang Green" he's so fucking cool he'll never go to school but he gets all fuckin' a's i swear he is a tool his brother is a cop he swims around in pools and when people walk by sometimes they say "you rule" he's also a firefighter brad makes me mad he fucked the girl i like he's friends with my sister he rides a motor-bike his band is really good they went on tour with Folly and he works i...
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we are now just nightmares on freedom-fried TVs i don't know if you were mentioning this with the "freedom-fried" adjective to express the idea that the two lovers' deaths are now part of a propaghanda machine.. but if you were, i love it.. very subtle way of going about it.. all while immediately tying it in with a tear-jerking, somewhat haunting conclusion.. i'm not sure if it would be lame but maybe instead of "lets ditch this joint baby." you could add a quote from t2 that only those who'...
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i love it.. it seems to me that this could literally mean a sister-sister relation ship or any female bonding... the words used like 'latent and pregnant now budding now flowering a red-blood fruition of Abandonment.' although im male i'm fascinated with similes and metaphors that apply to women directly... also the patterns were prefect... even though i try to study the overall feel of the words more than the rhythm.. thank you. i enjoyed it. p.s. if i were to give a critique i might metnion...
wow.. you have serious skill with words.. rhyming as many as four words together.. while most people would sacrifice quality and power of words with heavy rhyme.. you only make the words more powerful.. my favorite line would have to be "to tantalize me with precious preachings of pronounced prose". you've inspired me to write something similar.. im slightly confused with the ending.. however as i read it over i realize it talks about how your love and muse may have left.. but another may com...
chilling.. i sense a doomed relationship where the narrator is treated wrongly, maybe abused, by another.. her lust is only fueled by the abuse and wrongdoings to him/her... love it. i honestly cant say i see anything wrong in it... due to my taste in poetry that is short and snappy but still incredibly powerful and smart... every line ended in a word that one could look at without reading the rest and still get the meaning of the poem... i think its perfect. people who'll tell you theres any...
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