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AGE: 20
LOC: Fords, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 19

aaalright… i’ve been on urbis almost 2 and a half years now.. it seem severyone only views short stories and novel treatments.. i’m mainly into poetry/song lyrics etc… those two chapters i wrote for a novel i just winged…  

oh and like everyone, i have a myspace…

and i deleted it.

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Poetry / the clocks
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"questioning yourself you're left your own witness give it time to run by like clockwork you're breaking down with each pass" at half-past six thought you had it as a fix instead you're losing tick with each minute, you don't fit you're losing yourself with each hour that you sit give it time to run by or open up and look inside something's not right here.
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Lyrics / On the Bridge
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when you see me on the bridge dont snuff me out just gimme ridge i'm your best piece of advice with this conflict the struggle of choice between a well rounded life or that of masturbation clarity its closing us in its such a sin i have to admit i seek verity when you see me on the bridge dont knock me out just let me spin i'm the best friend you have in this darkness when you see me on the other side we'll lay our guns and let it ride i'll give myself to you when we die because we both don't...
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Inside, yea, i feel gifted Might be slightly half-twisted What a bitch, what a surprise what a joke! But when i'm the one uplifted Not wasting time not afflicted I'm a sage, I'm a prophet I am hope But I am a drone I Live alone I wrote "The Sky's Falling Down Upon My Home" From what I know I'm in the right tone It's kinda bullshit to sing alone when you are stoned I am a drone This is my home I say the sky's falling The world's all up in smoke And when I know I'll tell you so For now I'll han...
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 Plus-button Clarity
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hippies with guns they're at your college and school they're tryin' to make you dumb confusion, ridicule elitism is their weapon of choice with their "well read minds" and their knowledge and poise they'll do whatever they can to make you a sheep but you can't question them cuz they'll always cut deep hippies with guns say they're tellin the truth they're tellin their bullshit that you listen right through they'll tell you how to vote what's goin on in the world they'll shoot you in the head ...
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hippies with guns they're at your college and school they're tryin' to make you dumb confusion, ridicule elitism is their weapon of choice with their "well read minds" and their knowledge and poise they'll do whatever they can to make you a sheep but you can't question them cuz they'll always cut deep hippies with guns say they're tellin the truth they're tellin their bullshit that you listen right through they'll tell you how to vote what's goin on in the world they'll shoot you in the head ...
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wow.. you have serious skill with words.. rhyming as many as four words together.. while most people would sacrifice quality and power of words with heavy rhyme.. you only make the words more powerful.. my favorite line would have to be "to tantalize me with precious preachings of pronounced prose". you've inspired me to write something similar.. im slightly confused with the ending.. however as i read it over i realize it talks about how your love and muse may have left.. but another may com...
Poetry / In Love
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i like it alot. its very eduational. it gives me a new understanding of this disease witha ll the detail given. this is written from a male perspective and i must say you have seriously moved me though i can never know what your pain is like. the way you feel about this i can relate to my point of view. i also know the feeling of having a long-term diesase, having to take pills that make you sick as hell... it is concluded very well. awesome job.
Quotes / Old Tape
very true... perhaps that you shouldn't do the same as someone else did before you?
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