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AGE: 18
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 07

I love to read and write it’s a hobby although I need to use more of a variety of vocabulary. I would appreciate any help and reviews you give me.Please give me the truth when reviewing my pieces and give any suggestions. I write alot of stuff thats more for little kids and use alot of animals.I live on a farm and country life is the life for me I raise pigeons, chickens cows I am a major animal lover I spend time outside anytime I can.

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On the edges of your eyes come the tears due to goodbyes As you sit on the clinic floor holding your furry limp friend While crying you think of no more No more tickly licks or happy fuzzy faces No more clicking nails running on your kitchen floor No more annoying barks at the least little noise No more wet noses lying on your lap as you take a nap Your best friend on four legs is gone Memories race through your mind Although you can get another it's not the same There's always that one you w...
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Quotes / Friendship
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Ice melts,but a true friendship doesn't it stays solid as a rock forever.
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Quotes / Mountains
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I'd rather stand on the tip of a mountain alone than tumble with the rocks.
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Poetry / Changes
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Why do things have to change? Why can't things just stay the same? Too many chiefs and not enough Indians Everyone wants to be the boss But sometimes consumed by their hunger to change They make a slimy moss Slipping and sliding in their own world They care not about others but themselves Letting the old ways attract dust on the shelves As the new ways slither in and out overpowering the old While others who are strong and bold Take hold of what is right Sometimes losing the fight
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What's the use in believing in something for years that you know in your heart is right, if all of a sudden you're gonna give up and jump on the bandwagon.
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Horror / Flesh
interesting but really gruesome of course because its horror spooky
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sounds like it would be a good book great review
This is a great start in writing especially for a children's book i could imagine the book filled with bright colors i believe you meant to say Spotty the ladybug instead of the ladybird if so watch your spelling keep it up
Quotes / Open Eyes
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