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AGE:
28
LOC: Silver Spring, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 22
LOC: Silver Spring, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 22
I have written poetry about romance, spirituality, philosophy, the psyche, and co-wrote lyrics for my high school graduation theme song. I hope that my poetry touches someone out there in a positive way. God bless you.
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Version 1
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Me and ma baby Gonna go for a joyride To de town 'o lights To de town 'o lights we go Me and ma baby Gonna glow all night In de town 'o lights In de town 'o lights all gold Me and ma baby Gonna do just fine Gonna ride side by side To de town all night and ohh... Me and ma baby Gonna flow that's right In de town 'o lights In de town 'o lights we go
Version 4
7 Reviews
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Sometimes you get lost In the midst of so much chaos And when you seek perfection It can be a difficult mission Adam and Eve are our ancestors Therefore, we are all sinners You can run to the church And the Eden that you search Will make you feel brand new Or hide itself from you Have mercy on us Lord All we want are your rewards A mystery that saints are martyred And sinners continuously murder Is this your way God? Why are you so odd? In God's time the Pope says In our time we still must pr...
Version 4
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Are you as magical as you seem? A princess from my dreams Must you keep me enchanted? And take my true love for granted Magical is how you got me spellbound Nowhere else can your beauty be found Are you a chime like you sound? A dame on a throne wearing a crown Do you have to freeze me in place? And shy away from my embrace Magical is how you got me weak in the knees With thy beauty invading my dreams And all the lads and lasses dance And the mer people in a trance Just for me and you Our lov...
Version 4
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Can't get myself to forgive the world After my best friend passed on Maybe I should have listened to him But it's too late now that he's gone Laughter made our world complete Something each of us were free to give We believed in humor to shade the sadness The more bliss, the longer we live Funny that just yesterday we laughed together Funny that somehow it's all over My mind is still fixed on you and only you I cannot let anyone else take your place What we had was ours not the world's It is ...
Version 6
5 Reviews
3 Comments
All the girls that wear sarongs All the guys that feel my song All them people who belong I dare you all to move along At the beating of the drums Your lips start to move and hum You jump up to have your fun You are so a number 1 At the cry of the conch You begin to feel the funk You are actin' like a punk But you're not even drunk All the fish and spirits they watch All the birds and beasts and such All the trees that I have touched They have called me a top-notch At the beating of the drums...
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I thought this piece was a hella funny! And yes, it really amused me. I don't find anything wrong with it because it really is targeted for the youngsters. An adult, I would read it to my li'l nephew and all. As a plus, I looove cats. I find them sooo amusing and entertaining. (I like dogs too, but.) And yes it ends happily. Throughout the poem you make your cat seem so annoying but in your sincerity, the last line made me smile. Cheers to a job well-done!!!
What a beautifully written poem Hooray! I find that there is nothing wrong with it, very creative to the max. However, take it to a great editor, (I'm not) and have him/her polish it up. The last stanza though may need attention. But anyway, love your repetition, love your rhythm, love your metaphors, love the structure, love-love-love it all!
I find myself enjoying your poem here as I read through it. However, the way you wrote it sorta got me lost in the fanciness of your words. I understand that the poem is about how difficult it is for you who must forgive yourself over something terrible you did or somewhat. I dunno. But it is a beautiful poem and yes I can relate to it, those sleepless nights of feeling guilty, that endless darkness that tries so hard to devour me whenever I go to bed with something unresolved still lurking i...
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