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This is so powerful, it pains me so much. I love it, I hate it, it opens the wound. Your honesty and ability to expose and uncover are brilliant and enviable. The balance of humor makes it bearable (I might make the mistake of using a bit more humor; I think your choice to not let that be a detractor makes the story bleed that much more. Excellent). You make us realize that we all come from these horrific families, but your story is so intensely personal. Brilliant. 9 out of 10 for this: I kn...

GOD!!!! In a scant 14 lines ~ the EMOTIONS this accesses, paints, shares! SO powerful ~ the visuals, the immediacy! I am IN this piece, I feel it deep within. It is so personal, and yet ~ it is a scene out of life happening at so many tables all over the world ... past, present, future. And even as I am truly devastated by it, I find so much solace because of that fact. This is excellent.