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LOC: Federal Way, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 18
LOC: Federal Way, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 18
Trying to find my “legs” in the world of literature and creative writing.
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Unlucky in love No truer words were ever spoken Never the one chosen Always the one disposed of Looked over and over looked The first to give all heart The last to know it was done in vain Contineuously being brought to a place of brokeness Timelessly fighting back bitter tears of regret Yet effortlessly in a phase of hope One day it will change and my love will be returned
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Chapter I Scene: I This scene begins with Marsie, Chrystal, Natalie, and Deonte’ having lunch in the café of the hotel that they are staying at. Marsie is trying to read a map while the conversation is going on. Chrystal: Mars, this hotel is tight! I do believe that I need to change professions and get myself the kind of job that will pay me to go to exotic locations to chill for 2 weeks at a time. Marsie: Well, it’s not all fun and games. I think that I have my wor...
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Things that happened Act one: June Scene 1: The Docks Charlie, Tomas, and Lola are down by the docks. Charlie is sitting on some rocks with his notepad and guitar. Lola is standing next to Tomas by the shore, reading her letter. Tomas: So anyway, as I was trying to unbutton her shirt, she told me I was moving too fast. So then I tried to reach up her dress to pull down her panties….she pushed me away. So I lay back on the bed and closed my eyes. When I opened them she began to ...
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My fixation I am fixed on a boy I am consumed by him I want him I fantasize about him I look for him everyday When he is not around, my energy is down When he is around, I am tense He makes me feel sooooo He does things to me He pushes me away, then he draws me back in I soak up his energy like a flower basking in the sun light Just a few moments dwelling in his presence are priceless I wonder how long this will go on. Soon my fantasies will not be enough to curb my craving By then I will pr...
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The lights were dim, soft music was playing in the back…the temperature in the room changed when he slid up beside her and whispered something sweet in her ear, her panties got wet. The room started spinning as she began to imagine her hot wet pussy sliding up and down his long hard dick. She became torn in deciding what to do next. If she gave it up too fast she would be considered a ho. If she waited too long he might think she was merely a tease. Either way she didn’t feel she...
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Very simple yet eloquent poem. Anyone who has been in the same situation can easily relate.I truly believe that being able to write the emotions that come from a time like that can be theraputic for the author and a reader as well.
A very eloquent but sad love story. I like the use of imagery with the stars, ocean, flowers, and earth. Very nice work!
This is a very sound and sensible work.I enjoy the tone of contemplation. Interesting regard for the plight of man kind. Great job!
Very interesting imagery. The set up seems like a scene from a play or a movie. I realoze that I have not read your other work, which makes it hard to understand exactly what is going on in this particular piece. Is the speaker talking to another person? I would definitely love to read more just to find out what is going on and what will happen. Over all I liked it.
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