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LOC: Minneapolis, MN
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LAST LOGIN: August 19
LOC: Minneapolis, MN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 19
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time is soaked up by the objects animals and trees paper reconstruction, semblance built and burnt or built and flown effigies and paper planes torn up pages, playbills, pamphlets abstractions of our model homes every day by simple logic's simply just another day moving toward an apex parting ways with ways of thinking's waves time's an arrow, time's forgiving time forgets as it creates the book of life is made of marrow pray to bones of living things
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giant numbers lumber forward at a pace undefined from within the shuttle; time remainders, fragments, functions falling off and giving birth to space chains of protein, DNA everyone's the best everyone will be god when counting reaches a natural end the god of entropy of imaginary numbers an interim until then god's the sum of all it's parts interdependent arising; signs of meaningless or contradiction sew it's inverse to its sides
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harpooned, the internal bleeding will catch up in due time perhaps dragged into dramatic adventures soap box reveries brand your circles into my soft white under-belly without the aid of compass Cancer carapace cracked boiled in your inner juices charm, and other milky fluids glass cauldron box reflects your dimpled grin, your sin, your worry joy unraveled, liquidated going out of business sale heavy shadows trace the wires engulf me where I stand where I hide, where I am Oakland to Topeka At...
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we are just our memories searching frantic matter gray expression lost in tangled wire falling downward steel cling hobos sleep within my mind tracks that bind the trains to ground train myself to be okay grounded on this tangled path of flattened pennies in the dust the dust that covers all of us and books that say we come from dust your dust that dusts my dusty mind the passengers within my spine the spines of books that turn to dust when lusting eyes forsake their tracks and rail cars stan...
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You bring up some good points. I will take note of your theory about titles. I enjoyed your sarcasm and it really may help me as a new user to this site. I am still a bit bewildered by all the weird functions. This site is clearly all about ego stroking. Thanks.
it is too overtly angsty and the rhyming feels forced. I am by no means an opponent of rhyming, I rhyme quite a bit myself, but I really don't care for typical direct rhymes every other line in poetry unless they are very well done.
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