This is a really good poem. It contained wonderful imagery and I could imagine everything in this poem. You set the right mood and I enjoyed this poem a lot.

This was extremely good. This really makes people think, the beat is good, just everything that can go right in lyrics did go right. I think you're going to get an agent easily!

You've got talent. This is an incredible blog, and I don't have any crits. I like the mood it sets, the tone, and the way you wrote this and how it came across. Good job!

I like the rhyming scheme of the poem. I also like the structure. And unlike some poems I've read before, this poem didn't make me fall asleep. Good job!

I think this is a pleasant poem, until you suddenly put cuss words in. Remove the cuss words and change them to make it more pleasant. I also enjoy how you put the metaphors and similes in, and you should definitely get published.

I found this good, but not the best poetry on Urbis. It has good structure, but it is not very interesting. It is a nice try, though!

I liked this a lot. You describe things well. But I have a few critiques. I think you should edit this a little and look at punctuation and adding some commas. I also think you should make Hell a little more unreal. I love your ideas, and I could imagine the things you were describing, but I thought the man with the missing teeth was using a metaphor when he said it was Hell. I didn't realize that it was actually Satan's place until the end. So you did great. Just make it more obvious that yo...