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AGE:
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LOC: Terre Haute, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 07
LOC: Terre Haute, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 07
My name is William P. Rosser and I am a pen and paper game designer and freelance writer who specializes in short stories, poetry and novels. In my spare time I write of course and also play a lot of table top games with friends and family.
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“I don’t see the reason why we have to stay here and wait like this.” Brine said in an agitated manner. He looked over at Ekko from his roost on a pile of trash he had collected and waited for a response. The trio had been sitting this way for several hours now, sitting on top of piles of debris in order to try and stay off of a floor just in case some of the rain water had collected on it. As the storm continued outside, small streams of water began to come in through the c...
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As far as sci-fi goes, I dont think this story really counts as either that or as fantasy. The dialogue is definitely your strong point, but the short fight scenes that were included were actually very well written as well. Overall I liked this piece. I'm not really sure how I would classify it though.
This was an interesting look at something that we usually just sort of put aside. There were quite a lot of words that were not spelled correctly, a lot of which I saw on the first page. Spell check is your friend. Other than that, I actually really like how this read. It was clear and told a decent story about the life and times surrounding this particular shed.
Fantastic. The words flowed so nicely together and the imagery was right there to be seen by the minds eye. Keep it up.
The only thing I dont like about this is that there are so many poems like it out there. It's slightly depressing, but then again, good poems are not usually up beat are they? Structure looked good, the way it flowed was very good.
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