It's reading better everytime I read a piece of it. Keep it up.

This is too dark for me. It doesn't really sound like poetry,sorry. It sounds more like a killer confessing to killing a girl and keeping her body. I know u said to try and keep and open mind,but that's a little to open for me. Sorry!

I am a type of person that a good book or movie has to hold my attention right from the get go. And this did,it has very good potential.I don't pretent to know what I'm doing because I'm just someone who likes to write poetry sometimes but,I do know what I like. And I like this.

To myself and my husband I had him read it too. We think it has a little to much rhyme over flow. It needs a little more work but it's pretty good. I don't much about writing other than I like to write poetry.And if other people enjoy it that's all the better.

Poor girl. really good. I don't know much about the rating and all on here. But I know what I like and I like this.