starx's profile
AGE:
28
LOC: Bath, ME
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 18
LOC: Bath, ME
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 18
I am currently working on a short story book. My writing is a bit hard to understand, but i like it that way. It’s lots of descriptive words that may sometime become confusing; but that is just how i write. Words come at me so fast and create a visual world that i like to call star babble.
I also love photography, art, writing. I take a ton of photos and post them on deviant art: http://starlamanda.deviantart. MY print’s are for sale – just message me or email me for inquiries.
I also love my alternative modeling which i do at xplastic.net (warning it’s an “adult” site)
I love my two cats. I am vegan. I am drug/alcohol free. I draw and paint from time to time. Pretty much anything creative = me. I love playing with makeup.. trash…
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Stop. Wait. I hesitate. This could be true or nothing real at all i climbed the gates and took the plunge missed a a curve and shot down a wing let them all take themselves alive Y'know how your body is a temple? well this body is going mental seize the day in square one my name is Starla lets have some fun dark night bright star lies hit me up where the stars bleed sky i wear this heart on my sleeve again and again you cant tell me what to think when i pretend you know your body is a temple ...
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She carried on through out the night, wondering what lab test would be tomorrow. A straight line from her heart to her navel left from the last time she was tested. Intentions never what they seem. She lives in a dream. Burnt smells of despair from the kitchen and soft milk tea in her mouth. Floating on ginger soda and beer that wasn't meant to be- causing ridiculous conversations and limited memories of the past. "I'm finding each day you are more incomplete." A breath of fresh air- I'm suff...
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Kitty flashes. Salt lick gashes. The evening tide gripping you inside. I can feel a tip tap in my heart and I know you’ve beat my heart out again. It was the only way out. A teeth clenching scream. Once an omnivore, now the hunted. I see her coming in the sky. Hair of lace. Capsized I fall out of bed. Kat runs singing songs of dread. “I’ll tell you a story but please I must make it quick” It’s about a girl who lost her wits. Crazy girl roaring like the seas. Oh baby darling you’ve got what yo...
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The dream of hormonal stabs. girth in belly and child screaming in my arms. I wake to thunder in the drum of a cat star and there is nothing but sheer madness to capture a radiant glow. Puncture wounds straight down my left side catch a glimpse of you in the mirror and wonder why you didn't say hello earlier. Strangers sucking face in distorted candy cane land, a mans gotta do what a mans gotta do. Come a little closer my battered one. I'll kiss you clean and suck you dry until there's nothin...
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The community is rising against me I felt it coming when I was young The bitterness of the eyeliner smiles and the sucking of their teeth Grabbing you by the tail is nothing these days i'm starting to think I can only communicate with cats, maybe even stars or something like that I close my emotions and draw myself inward you want torcher? I'll show you raw abortion no painkillers this time I will become a pet to your enemy make sure to call my name at least once a day I may not remember you ...
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I like this. I like reality it brings to the reader. It quickly made me feel like i was in those shoes. Although it may not have meant to be a bit humorous it does have that somewhere in the background, i think mostly towards the end. And it's good to have a few different emotions in the story. Good job.
I like the way you've done this in the three versions. Each person's point of view speaks to me in different ways, which is think is great for the reader. The words you use are intriguing. My favourite part of this story is the wording you use and the last line. Very well done!
First two lines, are the best. It makes me feel like beboping myself. Which is a compliment. I like it.
I really like this. It's written in "my" style of writing. Which some people don't get. Your words are great and very descriptive though simple. I can image each sentance in my head and very visual. I think it's great.
I think this is very well written. It describes exactly what's going on so well. I love the words you use to do so. I can feel as though i am actually there. The last part is probably my favourite, all in all it's a great piece.
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