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AGE: 23
LOC: Satellite Beach, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 18

I am involved in the never-ending battle between consciousness and sleep, sanity and insanity, love and hate, life and death.

I love life when it loves me back, but am quick to leave it behind when dark clouds form overhead.

There is so much beauty in the world, I wish everyone would stop running around and actually look at the clouds, the sunset, the ocean, a flower, listen to the birds singing…. To breathe in deep, absorb life and its beauty.

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I ignore the battery acid building up in my arm and ease the final screw out of the weathered piling. It falls down into the darkness and lands somewhere ten feet below me in the damp, cold sand. All I hear is the sound of the ocean roaring and crashing against the shore a mere fifty yards behind me. That and the blood screaming through the veins in my ears. I pry the “This Town Is Tsunami Ready” sign from the wood, Despite its resistance, the sign is mine. Pleased, I pocket my tools, wrap m...
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I can hear the train- it's tinny whine signaling the dregs of town it's passing. The air is heavy, hot, humid, the last hurrah of September, the last of the summer nights. Soon the trees, once lush and full of life, will become bare, brittle and grey, snapping at a second glance. I toss again in my bed, exhausted but unwilling to let myself sleep, to let myself be happy. The sheets are hot and I kick them off again with a heavy sigh. I can play this game for hours. I watch the fan slowly spin...
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Short Story / The Sound of Sleep
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As I lay here trying to will my body to sleep I am suddenly aware of the monotonous ticking of the clock on the wall across the room. Why did I ever think that was a worth-while addition to the décor? All it does is mock me, laugh at my pain, the incessant pulse I subconsciously count in between trains of thought. I only seem to notice it then, the limbo when my brain stops to catch it’s breath in the dead of night. 3:05 and 31, 32, 33, 34.…… I close my eyes and involuntarily grind my teeth,...
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Poetry / Summer Skies
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Summertime watermelon often draw plump, lazy Flies And the seeds dribble down your cheek under azure, blue Skies Sipping cool lemonade under a shade tree often draw long, soft Sighs Watching slow fluffy mounds glide as the winter wheat Dies Hazily one’s mind travels back to poignant family Ties As a tear rolls down a cheek, because the only questions are Whys? The moon is in the sky and the moon really Tries But night time won’t come, as she sits here and Cries In fact it won’t come till she ...
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Novel Treatments / Open Roads
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Scanning the trunk one last time, I let it fall with a thud, careful to keep my fingers out of the way. That would be a great start to my journey: a trip to the emergency room to reattach my thumb. As far as I can tell, everything is packed snuggly in my car. My bags looked as excited as I feel, I could almost see them quivering in anticipation of the Great Unknown. I look up, squinting in the morning sun, and see my family lined up in the quintessential family-album pose, minus me. Dad has h...
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Interesting start so far. The double-jointed dog having the ability to write may be a bit of a stretch, but that all depends if you're going for serious believable, or little kid movie believable. I am intrigued about the rest of the story. My paws and legs are different then most, not that you would notice to look at me. My legs are double jointed. My paws are like a monkeys minus the thumbs. When walking I appear quite normal. This gives me the ability to pick up objects almost like a human...
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Short Story / No Gift to Bring
It's a little confusing in the middle, when Shira first gets to the house and everyone is apprehansive about what to do next. I wish there were more interaction between Mrs. F and Shira, or showed more depth or appreciation of her being there. Sure she says what a sweet gift, but I wish there was a little more depth. Overall a touching story.
Oh I like the ending, quite powerful. I too wish for the personal mulligan, it shouldn't only apply to croquet. I like how you broke it up, line after line, speeds up the reading and makes everything more emphatic. Nice job.
Poetry / Bite Me
I like the sarcasm and the scathing commentary of your crappy week. I like the self-indulgent whining style this is. It reminds me of a stubbed toe, everything's going fine until one slip up and bam! son of a bitch. Sort of beat poet in flow. Hope things change for the better
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