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AGE: 33
LOC: Canada
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 10

My name is Steph, I am originally from Montreal, but now living in Alberta, Canada. I have a degree in Creative Writing and a Teaching degree as well, and I taught elementary for four years. I am currently staying home with my two young daughters and reviving my writing passion that lay dormant while I pursued a teaching career. I am mostly a short story writer, but I dream of writing a novel someday. I just need to have an idea “big enough”. I also dabble in poetry and children’s books.

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Short Story / Dated
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7 Reviews   10 Comments
Dated This wasn't where Nina was supposed to be at 24. She had had it all planned out, and at 24 she was supposed to be getting married, planning every last detail. Persuading a reluctant Scott into a tux. They had agreed, or so she thought. Thinking back now, she probably just talked over him, ran over him with her words like an eighteen-wheeler. Of course, at seventeen when she met Scott that wasn=t what she was thinking. She was thinking nice butt. Her girlfriend Amanda introduced them, an...
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Short Story / The Hasty Highway
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6 Reviews   6 Comments
The Hasty Highway Where I grew up it’s not easy to get lost. The streets are numbered in order from 1 to 6, with Main cutting a slice between 3rd and 2nd. The avenues are numbered as well; but 1st Ave. is almost always called “railroad” because the railroad tracks run right beside it. If you stand looking at those tracks you can watch a train go off into the distance until it disappears. Sometimes I would watch the train and dream about leaving. Even though the farthest I h...
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Short Story / Hands
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4 Reviews   4 Comments
Maura McCarthy remembers the hands of every man she’s ever loved. When she sees Matthew’s hands, it’s love. His nails are rectangular, cut straight across, not too short. His fingers are long and straight. His skin looks juicy and ripe; she wants to bite the mound under his thumb. Most of all, she longs to touch those hands. She knew before she met him in person that he was perfection on paper: educated, career-minded, loves kids, and is just the right combination of handsom...
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Flash Fiction / Hands
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6 Reviews   7 Comments
Maura McCarthy can remember the hands of every man she has ever loved, including every boy she ever had a crush on. When she sees Matthew’s hands, Maura knows it is love. His nails are rectangular, cut straight across, not too short. His fingers are long and straight. He has no swollen sausages, or knobbly knuckles. His skin looks peachy soft, and the backs of his hands are free of gorilla-like fur. In short, the perfect hands, and in that moment, it is love. There is little he could do...
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Poetry / 3 AM
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9 Reviews   7 Comments
At 3 AM alarm sounds, a wailing siren, barely stopping for breath. Sleep-drugged, stumbling, struggling to lower the side rail, wailing surrounds ringing in my ears. This face unrecognizeable, a Munsch-like scream, glowing alien green in the nightlight.  3 AM is the darkest hour or so they say, before the dawn, it feels the loneliest. No cars pass, no birds chirp, snoring through the wall the only sound. My eyelids fight for closure, but the litle ones resist me, star...
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Please correct me if I'm wrong, but the spacing seems a bit haphazard, so I'm wondering if you had a formatting issue there in pasting it to Urbis? Poetry should be single-spaced, and the way it appears on here makes it seem like you have a lot of one-line stanzas. I loved the repetition of the I with the imagery, the cracked sidewalk was my fave. You conveyed your images very well, and the tone was upheld throughout. Nicely done.
Poetry / peanut butter
There is a lot of strong imagery here that I really enjoyed (i.e. "pushing fingertips in ot the creamy ground") and some parts I think still need to be tightened up. "reverse rainbow" I'm not sure what you mean by this - is it supposed to be an arc or a U-shape? If it's an arc, then use that wording, although I see what you are trying to do with the childlike imagery of a rainbow, it's the reverse I'm getting stuck on. "Just long enough to leave a thin layer of skin upon the peanut butter The...
This is well written, I like your descriptive elements ("i.e. how your fingers curl gracefully around your knife). More of this would really add to the piece. You can tighten up some of your wordiness in places where you are telling instead of showing. (an example of that is the first sentence in the 2nd stanza/para.) I agree it's not really poetry because of the format. Poetry can sometimes be written in paragraph form, but usually in that case it is held u[ by really strong imagery. You're ...
Poetry / Roadtrip
This reads more like prose than poetry to me. I think you could use some fresh imagery here, the wind in the hair does convey the freedom, but it is almost cliché. L6 behing should be behind L8 traveling should be travelling In the beginning of the poem, it seems like the journey is already under way (i.e. L4), but then in L14 the speaker still sees who they are leaving behind, that is confusing. If you want to keep it a poem, then I think it would be stronger if you cut some of the excess wo...
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