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There once was a limerick so awfully sad with more than five lines and scanning so bad. i think that the writer ought try to be brighter and make all his poor readers glad A limerick you see has only five lines and always in jest, the humour it shines so let's have another attempt my dear brother to save editorial fines i think you need to sing this with a sea shanty or some twangy country picking on the geeeetar

o.k. so you can write a coherent sentence. This is good and speaks of frustration and anger, yet is loose enough for the reader to make their own story up.. Personally, I would use a comma not a semi but otherwise it reads well. See not so hard to write a review that means something ! the other six worder is good too.

I think as a sketch for a future work this sparkles. I like the balance of putting it across as a descriptive work and then showing us the thought process you go through searching for words. It certainly grabs attention and makes me wish i had been in your skin for the day.. Looking to the comments about the parentheses, I think the first is a note to self about the gender and image of a possible character to be fleshed out in the later piece, so is fine as it is. for the second, i would sugg...

Hard to get a grip on this one.. The capitalization of the first three words suggest 'the grand escape' is a very significant and recognised place or item.. like a mystical and majestic staircase.. leading to a state of 'intense presence..' meaning possibly a super awareness of your surroundings or a heightened radiance and aura in the presence of others.. So all i can get from this is leaving behind something, like the clutter of daily life, news, t.v. etc. leads to this greater state.. That...