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AGE:
54
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 15
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 15
just a guy tryin’ to write as he figures things out… check out my myspace page if you like… http://www.myspace.com/streamwalker2001
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From the time I was 6 years old, I only ever remember wanting one thing for Christmas – a bike. I wanted a two-wheeler like most of my buddies had – a bicycle that I could go riding on with my friends. A bike that I could take out into the countryside after school and on weekends exploring the back roads and hills and valleys that surrounded the little town where I lived. And so every Christmas I would write my letter to Santa and ask him for a new bike. I didn’t care about what make it was o...
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Sometimes there are things that we say – things that we do - that grow bigger as time passes. Sometimes our actions and words ripple out through time and cause waves that jostle and bounce us years after they were done or spoken. Sometimes the seeds of word and deed grow into something greater and more beautiful than could ever be imagined… When I was kid we didn’t have a lot. In fact, even that is a bit of an exaggeration - we barely had anything. Dad worked hard, but he would have had to wo...
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"just a young lonely girl, hated by herself." - not sure what this line means - she hated herself? she was alone and hated? i like this - although i am curious as to whom she fought strings turning into a noose - nice line nice rhythym to this well done
Nice beginning - you have my attention... you haven't convinced me why the son would want to be like the man in the boat just seconds after seeing him. what about him was so impressive that he wanted to be like him even more than like his own father? "joined an militia"- not "an" perhaps "the"? "He didn’t this his answer would be..." - didn't "think"? "Will you take him them" - then i'll stop picking these errors (to save you points) you need to proofread this carefully as there are a number ...
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