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AGE: 22
LAST LOGIN: April 04

I’m a junior in college, majoring in English. I’m the oldest. I am half Korean and half Redneck (in a good way!). I am open to constructive criticism and ideas/contributions are greatly appreciated!

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Poetry / Ineo Gongju
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In Seoul, the streets burst with people. Brightly colored banners in chopstick languages Hang on poles that slither up to heaven like Babel’s Tower. But I am not in Seoul. I am on the Jeju Island Far from the faceless homogeny that permeates the mainland. Here is the last vestige of haggard faces That still remember the Old Ways. My mother is a mermaid With waterfall hair that glints obsidian And has blades instead of hands. She has fought jellyfish and sharks Like tigers that prowled in anci...
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Short Story / Rapture of the Deep
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Poetry / Naked Purity
I like this poem. I like how the lines get longer and more detailed at the protagonist ages. It's reminiscent of Joyce's "Portrait of an Artist as a Young Man." I think my favorite part of the poem is that last sentence, there's something very whimsical about it that I totally dig. I think the images could probably be more clear, especially the fourth sentence. I had to read that a couple of times before I got it. All-in-all though, keep up the good work!
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