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AGE:
32
LOC: Houston, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 26
LOC: Houston, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 26
I am a tragically idealistic person with artistic sufferings. I have a hankering for words and philosophies of men and god. I dream, I experience, I attain and I follow the ever nagging voice to overcome the negating of the sublime.
I talk to God.
I listen. I love. I hate. I create. Mostly, I thrive on a life lived and sometimes I know where I am going. Right now I live and go to school in Israel. Next year maybe London. Who knows, I change my mind often.
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she’s hot, she’s cold she’s just a little bit contradictory but isn’t that just it the absence of the absolute the sic et non of the counterfeit can this be dealt with systematically reduced tragically to fit we must determine this shes hot, she cold and i’m all over that because i fit in fine with the redundant rata tat tat i actually like her like that a swinging door lets hope it swings my way maybe then i can grab hold and stabilize her in-between’s cause.. she’s hot she’s cold she’s just...
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your words come out so kindly. your lips so soft. but the truth is hiding blindly behind the mask the void in unfulfilled silence you dance a masquerade at its finest. forward, back you invite me into your masterfully crafted world cast of shadows. the music begins lightly crescendoing increasing the tension of your gesture split second reasoning lends itself to my decision. curtsying, i take your extended hand. your fingers so long and lovely. the light flickers across the floor as we casca...
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i liked this. the line "and your brain was crushed under your crown" sticks out to me, though. maybe it gives to morbid of an ending for someone admired. anyhow, good job. keep up the good words!
i liked your story line. i wish it had been longer. In the line starting with "The remarked on how big" its needs to be they not the. there is not really anything i would change, you did good!
excellence. i loved this. the image picture you painted was fabulous. usually i do not like flash backs but you did it well and i did not feel jolted. the only sentence i had trouble with is, "I’m amazed I am in Paris, France and remember" i wonder if you take the word france out that it would not flow better? anyway, good job, keep creating!
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i liked the idea of this. it is very good. a few suggestions: !) "You make dinner by candelight And I like The way you you do that for me" one 'you' needs to be removed. and candlelight is misspelled. 2) i might leave out her name and keep it ambiguous. 3) "To earn the prize" and "My piece of pie" these statements seems a little cliche. you could leave them out and it would still sound good. i find simplistic beauty in this and can relate well to the check point phrase. i live in israel and t...
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