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AGE: 17
LOC: Lawrenceburg, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 24

I’m Rebecca.
Don’t forget it.
I’m no where near a super hero.
But I do have save-the-world syndrome.
I like food enough to be a fatty.
I love all pirates.
I live for musicals.
I dream in FRENCH.
Fosters kicks total butt, not even rowling.
Green beats every other color in the world.
Fairy tales are my thing.
Johnny Depp and David Duchovny are the sex.
&& in case you didn’t know, I’m radd.
Hit me up: aim – supabekka

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Poetry / His Words
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His words Drop from his mouth like bombs Made of crystal Full of reflections of beauty Twisted and warped His words Leap from his tongue to mine I swallow them, the pieces of burning coal That roll down my throat and settle in my stomach Burning merrily His words Sear my soul and torture my heart Laughing all the while Hiding so many layers I have to peel away Until they lay there, naked His words fall heavily on my ears.
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The words stutter out hesitatingly, one after another Eons in the space between each The tension is unbearable And the uncertain smile on your face enough to break a heart I know the hope shows in my eyes Gleaming behind walls of mistrust We're in a whole new game now With no knowledge of the rules You've been holding my heart in your hands And your fngers close achingly slow around it Whether to hold or to crush is unknown But you've caught me motionless in between breaths I've been busy rea...
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Poetry / Run
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My legs are pumping Pounding against the ground like an exclamation point For each drama in life My heart is beating Frantic against my chest; Drilling a hole to escape Landscapes flash by unnoticed Faces blurred into one technicolor mass Memories melted together with the acid of apathy All is hushed here; everything quiet No room for doubts Only the urge to keep moving Every cell strains to go faster, faster To keep the past behind them, and race against time To catapult themselves neatly ac...
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Poetry / Being Human
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Build a life of lego blocks And watch us tear it down Takes forever to put together And two seconds to wipe it away Destruction comes so easy Building, so hard Sings a sad song for humanity And it's been singing all along The seed of it in everyone Growing so rapidly From the beginning it sprouts Never quite going away It lies there with a vengence Waiting for it's time To tear things down Strip them bare It explains so much So many possibilities Hidden by instinct Torn by heart It makes no d...
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close your eyes, open your mouth the way they do in the movies the kiss to end all kisses a kiss that means the world next time it's new hair and a new boy the last one just didn't work out the kisses too often, just because they can meaning nothing in the end so many so often changing in a flash nothing meaning anything so many wasted lifetimes she sits, alone and crying reflecting on all the things she's lost that first kiss comes back like a slap she's lost it, again nothing left but the m...
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Poetry / STRESSED
Since you're a beginner, and you requested, I'll go easy on you. Everyone has to start somewhere. Some good things about your poem: it's original, you know what you want to say and you say it. I like that. Riddle-like poetry or poetry chalk full of symbolism is nice, but it's refreshing to hear someone mean what they say and say what they mean every now and then. Some things you could work on: the repetition of the word "stress" doesn't get your point across any better; it's just annoying. Th...
Poetry / All
I appracite what you're trying to do here, but it doesn't really fit together. When I was in 7t hgradem we had to write portfolios for the school. I wanted to submit a poem that I had written, but I teacher told me that I was forcing a square into a circular hole. That's sort of what your doing here, not using words specifically for their meanings, but because the fit and might also be able to lend a little bit of meaning to the overall piece. My advice? Don't focus on such a limited piece, u...
This quote doesn't really have any impact when reading it. It's not stand-out. It's good, but not great. Maybe next time?
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