suupjordan has no favorites yet.
suupjordan's profile
AGE:
18
LOC: Milton, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 27
LOC: Milton, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 27
No matter what I write here, it will never be enough.
I change my mind constantly.
Try to keep up.
Oh, and try hard not to get pissed off when I analyze the hell out of everything you do. I cant help it.
Im looking foward to hopefully going to school in Manhattan when I graduate this highschool bullshit.
My friends are too insane to explain,
and yeah I know that rhymed.
I pretty much just like to have fun.
Ill try anything three times.
Id school you in a freestyle rap battle.
Seriously, anytime.
I have become comfortably numb.
If something I say/do bothers you just tell me.
Its the only way to make it better.
I wish I was a flower child.
Teen Vogue is my shiiiit.
I enjoy practicing the art of keeping it real.
I can onl…
Items
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
You're saying you can't go on like this... But nothing's begun, So I should have nothing to miss. I'm empty and vacant 'Cause the bases of our relation Was intoxicated, and lacked motivation. I've never been as blatant As I was with you that night, Nibbling your neck Under the only street light. Although I'd love you for myself, It's your point that I can't fight. We have to douse ourselves in alcohol Just for our fire to ignite.
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
The scrape on my knee is scabbing from contact with cement walls due to hasty grabbing. I'm just hoping you always catch me. 'Cause after a couple 22's, and a decent dose of you, indecision's all I'm nabbing. Biting my lips will get me lit. You're aware, and fully execute this. Your breath on my chest; cardiac arrest. We're pretty much a secret until next time, I guess.
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
Burning down the streets of SoHo. Theighs, knees, calves, Ankles, feet, toes. Without a set place to go. Heads turn and beds yearn, All curious to know. Fast pased, its my place. Shine silver, and glitter gold. Cliche. All in the right ways. 'Cause it's with me you make your mold.
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
At birth it was known That I would be looked down upon As nothing but the bearer Of a daughter or a son. I am weak and I am frail. I am nothing compared to you. My simple mind cannot withstand Your tremendous wit and couth. But wasn’t it was SHE whom you leeched from? SHE built your mind from dust. SHE taught you how to feel and love. SHE enlightened you with trust. Yet you flatter yourself with credit For the likes of humanity. Although, you and yours would not exist If it were not for me. S...
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
One word could never fully define. One leaf is not a tree. One home; not a city. One drop; not a sea. One voice will catch no ears, If others do not speak. Revolution is denounced, Reguardless of the preach. They say ignorance is bliss, And this just may be true. But with a sense keen on corruption Speaking is all that we can do While our insides wait and ache, For the day in which you choose. 'Cause change seems like a nowhere place, But I will wait for you.
[ View all items ]
Reviews
Really great. The image is clear. I love the rhyme in the first two lines, the piece flows well because of it. The last line really sums up the entire piece well. There is alot of feeling and description, and your thought is fully understood while staying in the correct format. Loved it.
I completely agree with this haha. Haiku's arent my favorite things in the world, i try to stay away from both reading and writing them. I feel theyre really simple and underdeveloped, although some have amazing wording and completely developed thoughts. I guess it just depends on the writer.
This is a powerful poem. I can sense hostility. I really love this: former lovers who left when felt caught in the glare of headlights – froze, then bolted out of sight. The image there is wonderfully worded and well put together. The entire piece is very well penned. The choice of adjectives here really describes the sleazy kind of feel to the poem, and it's evident that the character described is just trying to fill an empty hole within themself through lust and whatnot. Great poem.
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
[ View all reviews ]
