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AGE: 45
LOC: Buffalo, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 28

FUN PERSON TO BE AROUND, GREAT SENSE OF HUMOR AND SELF. LOVE SINGING ,WRITING, DIRECTING AND ACTING.

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Version 1
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“CRACK ISN’T WHERE IT’S AT “ BY DIANE CHARACTERS 1.SHAQUAN: IS FRIEND THAT IS ADDICTED TO CRACK COCAINE. 2.MONICA: IS NIKKIS LITTLE SISTER 3.NIKKI: IS OTHER FRIEND ADDICTED TO CRACK COCAINE. 4.DASHA: IS FRIEND THAT IS NOT ON DRUGS, BUT DOESN’T KNOW HER TWO FRIENDS ARE ADDICTED TO CRACK. 5.LUCILLE: IS NIKKI MOTHER [LOUD MOUTH, ALCOHOLIC,PARTY ANIMAL,UNCONCERN ABOUT DRUG ADDICTED TEENAGE DAUGHTER. 6.CANDY: IS BIG DADDYS GIRLFRIEND 7. TYRONE: DRUG DEALER FLUNKY. 8. JEROME: DRUG DEALER FLUNKY 9....
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Version 4
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“CRACK ISN’T WHERE IT’S AT “ BY DIANE CHARACTERS 1.SHAQUAN: IS FRIEND THAT IS ADDICTED TO CRACK COCAINE. 2.MONICA: IS NIKKIS LITTLE SISTER 3.NIKKI: IS OTHER FRIEND ADDICTED TO CRACK COCAINE. 4.DASHA: IS FRIEND THAT IS NOT ON DRUGS, BUT DOESN’T KNOW HER TWO FRIENDS ARE ADDICTED TO CRACK. 5.LUCILLE: IS NIKKI MOTHER [LOUD MOUTH, ALCOHOLIC,PARTY ANIMAL,UNCONCERN ABOUT DRUG ADDICTED TEENAGE DAUGHTER. 6.CANDY: IS BIG DADDYS GIRLFRIEND 7. TYRONE: DRUG DEALER FLUNKY. 8. JEROME: DRUG DEALER FLUNKY 9....
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Version 3
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“CRACK ISN’T WHERE IT’S AT “ BY DIANE CHARACTERS 1.SHAQUAN: IS FRIEND THAT IS ADDICTED TO CRACK COCAINE. 2.MONICA: IS NIKKIS LITTLE SISTER 3.NIKKI: IS OTHER FRIEND ADDICTED TO CRACK COCAINE. 4.DASHA: IS FRIEND THAT IS NOT ON DRUGS, BUT DOESN’T KNOW HER TWO FRIENDS ARE ADDICTED TO CRACK. 5.LUCILLE: IS NIKKI MOTHER [LOUD MOUTH, ALCOHOLIC,PARTY ANIMAL,UNCONCERN ABOUT DRUG ADDICTED TEENAGE DAUGHTER. 6.CANDY: IS BIG DADDYS GIRLFRIEND 7. TYRONE: DRUG DEALER FLUNKY. 8. JEROME: DRUG DEALER FLUNKY 9....
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Quotes / ALL THAT I HAVE
Version 3
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I have all these hidden talents I don't know what to do with them What to do, What to say I am so shy time is slipping away Words comes crushing, crashing Creativity, emotions are flowing excitement craving to come out bursting, dying, crying, All that I hidden within.
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Version 2
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Singing is to breathing, breath taking it would be, I live for it, It makes me whole, It completes me, It is my passion, My one my true love
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Quotes / I Pissed God Off
MY 18 YEAR OLD SON FEELS LIKE THIS, BUT HE KNOWS WHY GOD IS PUNISHING HIM. YOU HAVE TO FOLLOW GODS PLAN. GOOD LUCK
Short Story / The Room
I thought this was an interseting read. I like how you used your descriptive creativity, when describing the room and its contents. Then it got kinda eree, when you wrote how you had written in the tablet and there was nothing there. That made me want to read futher. I must say I have had dreams that seem so real. It seems like you were jumping around a bit. But you may needed to do that do to the fact that it was about different dreams, not just one . I liked it very much. Good Luck!
Short Story / The Barney Rubble Blues
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I believe it's what you do with the fame that makes the difference.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Chapter 1 of my fantasy story
This version was much better, it seem like you took your time and let your creative juices flow. much better.