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AGE:
40
LOC: Slidell, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 15
LOC: Slidell, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 15
I am a soon to be 40 yr old interior designer and mommy to a 3 month old Shih Tzu named Chloe. I have 3 older children who know everything. I have attended workshops for children’s fiction and short stories…
I have always loved poetry and while my stories were for my children the poetry was always mine…
Now I want to put some things out there just to be heard and see if anyone else relates. Maybe one day I will do a book for my kids or for myself to give to them in the future.
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thank you for your noble lies, i know you really care. thank you for the abandonment, a trait that you all share. thank you for the silence in reply to my sacrifice and pain. thank you for resentment for any ground that i might gain. understand my back now as i turn and walk away the clicks of my stilettos are all i have to say.
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tainted little angel... thinking love the answer that it would conquer all... your pureness your undoing then you began to fall... now, tattered wings are dingy from failed attempts to fly from loveless situations that hurt and made you cry... shadows cast upon you so cold and yet so true show you are a broken vessel there is nothing left to do.. damaged beyond repair before your cause could be revealed fragmented, jagged internally no essence to be healed. now you are the tainted one earthbo...
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prayer for closure.... as you are aiming your gun loaded with lies i will pray: make me bulletproof or a magnet. do not let me suffer and bleed... i don't want to feel this pain please end it peace is all I need... this suffering is not noble it is raw and to my core... the tears flowing are like acid and i can't do this anymore... i am the sum of my sorrows i am a well that will never run dry. i am the one whose soul will be forever alone the one that nurture and comfort deny... make me bull...
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I wander this maze on a quest for your heart. When we are together intimacy dissolves- we are closer- apart. Your baggage disguises the way I should go. Dead ends are endless the clues are so slow... in coming ...as I search for a path yet untried some reward for my effort for a lie yet unlied... I can't end what's began I can not solve the maze I stumble in the sameness I call out in the haze Faint echoe's haunt me of what once began as the deepest of connections and of love for a man...
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among the shouts and hurricanes close to the notes that blare below the beads that abandon balconies you will find me there... around the corner from House of Blues at 7s i begin with merlot before we dance the morning in with everyone we don't know... the platinum blonde with the website will serve us our platter of lies As the pickpocket in training brushes by you while we look her straight in the eyes... among the shouts and hurricanes close to the notes that blare below the beads that aba...
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This was a challenge to review. I get the stream concept but in defense of understanding which would lead to better appreciation I would like to revisit this broken down. I could see where you say that you are probably the only one that would get this and that was not a deterrent to me because usually I can relate to a piece in my own way. However, I don't get it. I think that there is much to relate to if it could be more readable.
I have to remind myself that my task is to review here and not answer the why's! I relate to your questions but would have liked to see an intro of some sort here at the very beginning. I think that you should make statements at the beginning and/or end. Statements in the middle only muddy the flow and weaken the impact of the Why's. The scumbag section could be a completely different piece and you could address your rage at them. Lastly, I can just feel the strength, independence and dignity...
I found myself disoriented as children's names came up. I enjoyed reading from a grandmother's perspective and how she reflected back on her own childhood. I think that there were alot of things going on here that weren't really addressed. The long distance Aunt for instance..how did she perceive the children internally? Did she have judgements on the in-law or the house. I think you have a much longer story in here!!! I would love to see more info on this. Thank you for the piece!
beauty. so many questions regarding circumstances but the joy in coming to my own conclusions is fulfilling. Is this an overdose? Is this a plane crash in the mountains? i love the part where you know you are alive because you feel pain. I know this feeling well. I have no constructive criticisms. Thank you for your piece.
I would love to know the background of this peace.... I sense anger, acceptance, anxiety. I love the way you always go back to the water dripping in your room. I would love to get more emotion from this piece. I feel I've only scratched the surface...I'm in your head only semi detached...you are in your head only semi detached. It's as if a nurse is giving stats..."stomach in knots, patient is cold and clammy..." What are your thoughts in the 5 minutes of burlap time? Thank you for this piece.
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